Good morning, everyone~
I'm glad to know you all since you are so amazing, vigorous and friendly (原句比较啰嗦,而且shock表示"震惊",用在这里不恰当)!
Now I am very pleased to introduce myself to you(原句比较啰嗦).
My name is Chris, and I graduated from Beihang University last year. My major was Electronic Engineering, which is important experience for working in the industry of electronic components.
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As a foreign trade salesperson, I have acquired one-year valuable experience from my last corporation AVC, which is one of the
largest system thermal solution suppliers in the world, so it would be easy and exciting for me to negotiate with foreign suppliers in English.
Well, in my spare time, I often go roller-skating, read some books or watch NBA games.
I’d like to be a friend with you all and I look forward to joining our excellent team.
That’s all! Thank you very much!