分类突破(四) (半)开放作文
解题指导
写(半)开放性作文,考生首先要读懂所给的提示,弄清情况和要求,然后抓住关键词句,进行记叙、解释、说明、议论,再根据要求加以合理想象,并用通顺的语言表达出来。要具体做到:
1.认真审题,把握要求,找准关键句,提炼主题。 2.依据主线,草拟提纲,梳理文章脉络。
3.定位人称,确立时态,遣词造句组篇章。(半)开放作文人称的使用较为灵活,考生应根据文章提示准确定位人称,然后将重点放在文章的遣词造句上,尽可能运用自己熟悉的表达形式来灵活表达。
实战演练
(2017·甘肃天水甘谷二中模拟)
假设你的笔友Tom因上次高三期末数学考试未及格而备受打击,情绪低落。请你(王华)给他写一封信,鼓励他重拾自信,实现梦想。 注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 构思要点 请写出要点提纲
范文赏析 欣赏并背诵满分作文 DearTom,
I’msorrytohearthatyoufailedinthelastfinalmathexambutwhatworriesmemostisthatyouareinlowspiritswhenfacingfailure.
AsSeniorThreestudents
,,
weallhavetakenexaminationsofdifferenttypesandexperiencedfailureaswellassuccess.Thereisnodoubtthatweshouldtakepositiveattitudestowardsoursetbacks.Weshouldsparenoeffortstoanalyzethecauseoffailure
,
whichcouldhelpusescaperepeatingthesimilarmistakes.Onlywhenwefindoutthecauseofourfailurecanwemakeprogressinourstudy.Asforyouranxiety
,
Ithinkdoingsomesportsisgoodforyoubecauseitcangiveyousometimetoberefreshedinbothbodyandmin
dsothatyoucangoonwithyourstudyenergeticallyandefficiently.
Ihopeallabovecanhelpyoualot.Let’sworkhardtogetherandturnourdreamsintoreality.
Yours, WangHua
作文升级 依据括号内提示改写满分作文 DearTom,
I’msorrytohearthatyoufailedinthelastfinalmathexam
,
but①itworriesmemostthatyouareinlowspiritswhenfacingfailure(当你面临失败时的低落情绪是最让我担心的;it作形式主语).
AsSeniorThreestudents
,
weallhavetakenexaminationsofdifferenttypesandexperiencedfailureaswellassuccess.Thereisnodoubtthatweshouldtakepositiveattitudestowardsoursetbacks.②Inordertoescaperepeatingthesimilarmistakes,weshouldsparenoeffortstoanalyzethecauseoffailure (为了避免犯同样的错误,我们应该不遗余力地分析失败的原因).③Findingoutthecauseofourfailure,wecanmakeprogressinourstudy (找到了失败的原因,我们就能在学习中取得进步).Asforyouranxiety,Ithinkdoingsomesportsisgoodforyoubecauseitcangiveyousometimetoberefreshedinbothbodyandmindsothatyoucangoonwithyourstudyenergeticallyandefficiently.
Ihopeallabovecanhelpyoualot.Let’sworkhardtogetherandturnourdreamsintoreality.
Yours, WangHua
对点训练
(一)
(2017·河北石家庄二模)
假如你是高三学生李华。你从新华网上得知21stCentury就“我们如何支配压岁钱”这一主题向大家征稿。请用英文向报社投稿,介绍你的预算。 注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。 DearSirorMadam,
I’velearnedfromwww.xinhua.comthatyouarelookingforarticlesonhowtospendgiftmoney.
Yourssincerely,
LiHua
参考范文 DearSirorMadam,
I’velearnedfromwww.xinhua.comthatyouarelookingforarticlesonhowtospendgiftmoney. InChina
moneytogooduse.HowIbudgetmygiftmoneyisasfollows.
Firstofall,Iwanttobuysomebookstoenrichmyself.Inaddition,Iwilljoininasummercamp,whichcannotonlybroadenmyhorizonsbutalsohelpmegetconnectedwithotherstodevelopthespiritofteamwork.Besides,Iplantogiveawaysomeofmymoneytothosewhoareinneedofhelp.
Anyway,weshouldspendourgiftmoneydoingsomethingusefulandmeaningful.
Yourssincerely, LiHua (二)
(2017·河北石家庄二模)
假定你是李华。你的美国朋友GaryLee即将来华。他想有一个中文名字,向你求助。请回复邮件,介绍中文姓名的特点,帮他取一个中文名字,并简要说明理由。 注意:
1.词数100左右; 2.名字可用中文表示;
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 DearGary,
Yours, LiHua
参考范文 DearGary,
I’mverygladtoknowthatyouarecomingtoChina.OfcourseaChinesenamewillhelpyoufitinwiththenewculturebetter.
ThebiggestdifferencebetweenChinesenamesandEnglishnamesisthatweputthefamilynamefirst.AChinesenameusuallyconsistsoftwoorthreecharacters
,,,
itiscommonforuschildrentoreceivegiftmoneyduringtheSpringFestival.Soitisimportantforustoputthe
whichoftencarrysomespecialsignificanceorexpectations.Asyouareanenergeticandwarm-heartedboy,Irecommendyouthename李阳,LiYang.Thefamilyname,whichissharedbybillionsofChinese,hasthesamepronunciationasyours.ThegivennamemeansthesuninChinese.
IhopeyoulikeyournewnameandhaveareallygoodtimeinChina.
Yours, LiHua
因篇幅问题不能全部显示,请点此查看更多更全内容