2020年中考英语作文总复习题及答案解析 (132)

1．去年暑假你到哪里旅行了？请你根据下列表格提示内容，运用所学语言谈谈你自己的旅程，写一篇题为\" A trip to Yunnan\"的英语短文．注意文章的结构与时态的运用． 要点提示： Weather Sunny and cool

Where the zoo / the National Park Who my parents and two cousins How took the plane to… Activities

see birds and elephants take a lot of photos

ride an elephant （exciting） buy some gifts eat delicious food

Feeling

Exciting and happy

写作要求：（1）必须包含所给的全部要点及内容，可适当发挥． （2）文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名．

（3）字数80 词以上，．开头已给出，不计入总词数．

A trip to Yunnan

I took a trip to Yunnan on my last summer vacation． 【分析】【高分句型一】

The weather was sunny and cool，just right for the trip． 天气晴朗凉爽，很适合旅行．just right for …恰好适合…… 【高分句型二】

We visited some places of interest， such as the zoo and the National Park．

我们参观了一些名胜古迹，如动物园和国家公园． place of interest名胜古迹，如

【解答】A trip to Yunnan

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such as 例 I took a trip to Yunnan on my last summer vacation．I had a wonderful trip there．（ 开篇点题）I arrived there by plane with my parents and two cousins．（和父母亲表兄弟一起坐飞机去那儿） The weather was sunny and cool，just right for the trip．【高分句型一】（天气） We stayed in Yunnan for seven days． We visited some places of interest， such as the zoo and the National Park．【高分句型二】（参观的景点） We saw birds and elephant．We rode an elephant there【高分句型二】It was exciting． We also took many photos and ate delicious food． It was very nice． （参观的景点，做的事情，吃了美味食品）I also bought some special gifts for my friends．（买了礼物） I really felt excited and happy（我的感受）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

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