姓名：潘同学
学校：泸州市纳溪中学
分数：90
Hello!MynameisGina.Iamagirl.Iamtidybutmyfriendisnot.Iam12yearsold.Look,Ihaveabeautifulandbigbedroom.MyEnglishbooksareinthebookcase.Mypensandpencilsareinmypencilbox.Ihaveawhitebike.Mywhitebikeisonthefloor,butmyTVisnotonthefloor.Ihaveaclock.Look,whatisonthewall?Therearesomelovelycartoonpicturesandaclockoftheworld.Myquiltisonthebed.Thebedisinthemiddleoftheroom.It'snotsobigbutit'sverybeautiful.Mychairisunderthedesk.There'snocomputerinmybedroom.Ihaveabrother.Heisnottidy.Ilikemybedroomverymuch.Mybedroomisverynice.
【评语】
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