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2021全国高考英语最新模拟题分类汇编

专题10:读后续写(含范文)

一、读后续写01

(2022·山东临沂·一模)

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 As a nurse at the cancer care center where I’ve worked for seven years, I’ll do almost anything to make a patient feel better. But when I met Patty at the center, in 2011, she didn’t want my help.

She was a tiny 44-year-old single mom battling an aggressive head and neck cancer. Unlike many of our other patients, Patty was alone during her treatment, but no matter what I did. I couldn't get her to open up. She just buried herself in book or pulled a blanket over her head to fend off conversation.

Eventually I hit on a reliable way to make Patty smile: mentioning her nine-year-old son, Stephen. She'd tell me how well he did in school, how he'd been selected to read a poem he wrote at a local bookstore. She desperately wanted to live for him. With three kids myself, I totally understood how she felt.

After a year and a half of treatment, in August 2012, Patty was told her cancer had spread, and I learned she wouldn't live much longer. My first thought was, “What's going to happen to Stephen?”

Nurses at the center shared stories at their meetings about how bright and unusual the boy was. but no one seemed to know how to resolve the issue of what would happen to him when his mom died. My husband, Michael, who too works at the center, started hearing about Patty and Stephen.

One morning in October, Patty quietly slipped away. Michael and I picked Stephen up after school, drove him to a nearby park, and sat on a bench by a pond. I finally managed to say, “Stephen, we're sorry to have to tell you this, but your mom came to an end this morning.” The sound that came out of his mouth was like nothing I'd ever heard before. This skinny little guy sat between the two of us and just wailed (哀号) and wailed. It was as if his whole world was just destroyed. 注意:

1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Something inside me was telling me what to do.

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Finally, we took him home with us.

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【范文】

Something inside me was telling me what to do. I wanted to help the poor boy. Although I had three children of my own and a modest family income, I decided to adopt the boy. I told my husband what I thought, and he immediately agreed, saying, \"That's exactly what I wanted to tell you.\" I told the boy we would give him a home and take care of him for his mother. The boy nodded, crying.

Finally, we took him home with us. We introduced Stephen to our three children and told them that he would live with us in the future. My children happily accepted and warmly took Steven to visit his new home and discussed making room for Steven. I was glad that my children were so kind and willing to share everything with other children. Stephen soon integrated into our family and lived a happy life with us.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在癌症护理中心作护士,Patty是一位患有脑 癌的病人,她去世后留下了她的儿子Stephen,Stephen知道自己的妈妈去世后哭得很厉害。【点睛】

[高分句型1]Although I had three children of my own and a modest family income, I decided to adopt the boy.(由although引导的让步状语从句)

[高分句型2]I told my husband what I thought, and he immediately agreed, saying, \"That's exactly what I wanted to tell you.\"(由what引导的宾语从句,现在分词作状语,what引导的表语从句)

二、读后续写02

(2022·海南·一模)

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 There is a homeless (or at least very poor) woman who sometimes is sitting near where I am living. begging for money. Unfortunately, the “inner city places” are often being “strongly requested” by younger men and women who take over the space.

Whenever I see her, I make sure to give her something, and if I am out of money, at least I talk to her for a few seconds. When younger people are around, I often make sure to drop a few coins into her cup while passing her a note without anybody seeing it in the hope that they will leave her alone.

Today she surprised me. I was passing her again, giving her some money, and asked her how she was. She surprised me by saying that she wanted to thank me. Not for the money. Well, for that too, but for always taking the time to talk to her.

She mentioned how hard it is for her to have so little money that she has to beg. She often feels ashamed, but she now has prepared for several days to talk to me, and to thank me for treating her as a human being. Some people only walked by or sometimes dropped some money. But they never made eye contact or talked to her. which made her feel even more ashamed, almost non-human. She said she was looking forward to my walking by because she knew I would look at

her and see a person. On hearing all this, I had tears in my eyes, and still do, when thinking of this.

I still don’t know why she is on the street. Maybe one day she will open up, but I will not ask her right away. But I will be even more on the lookout for her, making sure to talk to her as often as possible!

注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

One day she mentioned her unhappy experiences to me.

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I felt sorry for her and decided to help her out.

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One day she mentioned her unhappy experiences to me. She used to have a whole family though it was not rich. Her husband was a taxi driver and she took care of the home, looking after their two children, both of whom were at school. She herself did not have a job and only depended on her husband’s income to support the family. But unfortunately, her husband died in a car accident last year, so her family got into trouble. She had to beg to survive.

I felt sorry for her and decided to help her out. I first discussed with my friends about how to help her. We finally decided to raise money for her in the community, and we also did so online. People responded enthusiastically to our appeal by donating money. So we quickly raised a big sum of money. We suggested that the lady use the money for certain business. She followed our advice and started a fruit business. The daily income was enough to support her family without begging. I’m so glad to see that. Although I spent much time and energy helping her, I gained considerable satisfaction and happiness. 【导语】

本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了一个女人因丈夫死于车祸后,家庭陷入了麻烦,她不得不在作者家附近乞讨,作者常会资助她,还和她说话;在得知了女人的处境后,作者和朋友为她筹款,最终这个女人开了水果店,不用再乞讨了。 【点睛】

[高分句型1]. Her husband was a taxi driver and she took care of the home, looking after their two children, both of whom were at school.(现在分词形式作伴随状语和whom引导的非限定性定语从句)

[高分句型2]. We suggested that the lady use the money for certain business. (suggest后接使用虚拟语气的宾语从句)

[高分句型3].Although I spent much time and energy helping her, I gained considerable satisfaction and happiness.(although引导的让步状语从句) 三、读后续写03

(2022·广东梅州·一模)

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The familiar smell of garlic and onion filled the air as I opened my lunch bag to see what my mom had packed for me. On any other occasion, I would have been delighted to eat my mom’s pan-fried tofu: a Chinese dish that I often ate for dinner. But not today,the day a nice girl had invited me, the new girl at school, to sit with her friends during lunch.

“Charis, over here!”My new friend was waving her arms, trying to get my attention. As I prepared to walk over to the table, memories of elementary and middle school lunch times resurfaced. I remembered my embarrassment as my friends would hold their noses when I brought homemade Chinese food. I remembered how my embarrassment shifted to anger when I complained about the smell to my mom.

I had argued with my mom that I wanted “normal” food for lunch. I remembered the look on my mom’s face, a mix between disappointment and confusion. But I was determined and she gave in. So for the remainder of middle school, my mom packed odorless(没有气味), non-Chinese food like ham and cheese sandwiches. However, that day, she was in a rush and packed me leftovers from dinner.

As soon as I got to my new lunch table, I tried to hide my lunch bag down under my seat. I sat quietly, trying not to be noticed when Katrina, a new acquaintance, asked where my food was. “I’m not really hungry,” I replied in an insecure voice. But Katrina had already seen me carry my lunch so she spoke out, “Then, I’ll eat it!” The other girls laughed-apparently Katrina was known to be a big eater.

I didn’t want to be rude to a potentially new friend, so I reluctantly dragged out my lunch bag. The moment I lifted the cover of my lunch container, I could practically taste the garlic and onion.

The girls, piqued(激起好奇心)by the smell in the air, all curiously looked at the oval-shaped container. I expected an “Ew” or a“What is that” 注意:

1. 续写词数应为150左右;

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

I had expected them to turn away-and turn me away before Katrina grabbed a small piece of tofu and enjoyed it.

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I had expected them to turn away — and turn me away before Katrina grabbed a small piece of tofu and enjoyed it. And I most certainly did not expect her to encourage the rest of the table to try my lunch. My new friends were going on about how lucky I was that my mom took the time to prepare a cooked meal for me. They were surprised by the fact that tofu could actually taste good. While I didn’t get to eat any of my mom’s pan-fried tofu, I was full of pride and gratitude.

When I arrived home, my mom asked how my day went. Answering with a simple “Good,” I pulled out my lunch container from my bag. “I’m sorry, but I didn’t have time to buy bread or ham yesterday.” But when she noticed that the container was empty, she hesitated before asking, “How was the food?” I paused a moment before I replied, “Perfect, mom. If it’s not too much trouble, can I still have pan-fried tofu for lunch tomorrow?” 【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章以作者的午餐——煎豆腐为线索展开,讲述作者害怕自己的午餐像从Katrina前那样让新朋友Katrina觉得难闻,因此不敢在她面前打开饭盒,并谎称自己不太饿。提出她想吃作者的午餐,作者最终打开饭盒,里面的饭菜让Katrina和同学们好奇。 【点睛】

[高分句型1]They were surprised by the fact that tofu could actually taste good. (运用that引导同位语从句)

[高分句型2]But when she noticed that the container was empty, she hesitated before asking, “How was the food?” (运用when引导时间状语从句和that引导宾语从句) 四、读后续写04

(2022·江苏泰州·一模)

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One afternoon after school, Mary and her brother,Keith,were eating at a cafe near their home. That afternoon, they had to share their table with another person. That person was a young lady in her twenties. After eating, she went to the restroom. Without realizing, she had left her handphone on the table. Five minutes later, she came out and walked out of the cafe without looking back.

Mary saw the handphone on the table. She quickly told Keith,“Keith, the girl left behind her handphone.”

Keith looked at the handphone. It took his breath away. It was one of the latest models on the market. Keith had always wanted a handphone. But his parents had told him, “You don’t need one. You can always use the house phone.”

He stared at it for some minutes. Then he said slowly,pausing on every word,“I want to take the handphone.”

Mary could not believe her ears. She merely stared at her brother. “You can’t! What if the owner comes to look for it?”

Having made the decision,Keith quickly grabbed the handphone and put it in his schoolbag. Then, he took Mary’s hand and led her out of the cafe quickly.

Once back home, Keith locked his house door with trembling hands. Inside his room, he took out the piece of beauty. Oh, he liked it so much. Now he had his own handphone. Soon, he was polishing it happily.

But Mary told him, “Keith, you cannot keep the handphone. What will you tell Father about this? He will ask you how you got the handphone.”

Keith said quickly, “I will say a friend lent it to me.”

Mary said, “Now you are lying too.” Oh dear! When had Keith turned so dishonest? Then Mary saw a house phone number on the plastic cover of the handphone. “This is the girl’s phone number. Why don’t we just call this number? We will talk to her and ask her to come and take back her handphone.” She was trying to talk some sense into him. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

That night, Keith turned over in bed from time to time.

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Mary was very happy to hear that.

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That night, Keith turned over in bed from time to time. He had difficulty sleeping, uncertain about what he should do. Of course, he liked the new handphone. However, he was feeling sorry for the owner. When he thought how sad the young lady would be at the loss of her handphone, he

was full of guilt and shame. The next morning, after a long and restless night, he was determined to return the handphone to the owner. After school, he told Mary, “I am going to phone the owner.”

Mary was very happy to hear that. Back home, they phoned the owner’s house phone. A girl answered the phone. Kevin asked, “Are you the owner of the handphone? I’m Keith. I have your handphone. Can you come and get it? ” The girl replied ‘Yes’ excitedly, expressing her gratitude repeatedly. Ten minutes later, she was at the same cafe to meet Keith. Handing back the handphone to her and seeing her smile happily, Keith realized that honesty was indeed the best policy. 【导语】

本文以玛丽和她的弟弟基思捡到一部手机为线索展开,讲述了玛丽和她她的弟弟在咖啡馆吃饭时,无意中捡到了一个女孩落在桌上的手机。基思非常喜欢这部最新型号的手机,尽管玛丽阻止,他还是把手机带回家了。玛丽发现手机塑料盖上有一个电话号码,她劝说基思打这个电话联系女孩。基思经过思想斗争,意识到诚实才是最重要的,终于打了那个电话,他们相约在那个餐馆见面,把手机还给那个女孩。 【点睛】 [高分句型1]

He had difficulty sleeping, uncertain about what he should do.(运用了连接代词what引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]

Handing back the handphone to her and seeing her smile happily, Keith realized that honesty was indeed the best policy.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) 五、读后续写05

(2022·广东茂名·一模)

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

A Midnight Rescue

It was not uncommon to carry out tasks at night as rescuers. Harry and David were informed of their task when it was nearly midnight. It was urgent so there was no time to hesitate. They headed into the forest.

The forest was black and silent. A little way into it they reached a fork in the earth path. Harry and David took the left path. They walked in silence, their eyes on the ground, watching out for the traps like big pits(坑)set by the illegal hunters. Every now and then a ray of moonlight through the branches above lit a spot of scarlet(猩红的)blood on the fallen leaves.

David saw that Harry looked very worried, asking, \"Could Unicorn be hurt that badly?\" Harry answered, \"If we can't find it as soon as possible, it doesn't stand much chance to survive.\" Of course, Unicorn was not the animal in fairy tales but the nickname of a 3-year-old elephant, the

last wild elephant in this forest. The nickname was given by the biodiversity rescuers who were protecting every member in this forest. They knew Unicorn was obedient and not afraid of human beings and that sometimes put it in danger. \"Without it, the forest was not complete. Those illegal hunters should be thrown into prison.\" Harry thought, carrying his first aid kit(急救箱)on his back and walking forward with his flashlight.

It seemed that thick fog would come at any time, which would increase the danger. Harry hurried into the heart of the forest with David. They walked for nearly half an hour, deeper and deeper. There were blood splashes(血迹)on the roots of a tree, as though the poor creature had been struggling around in pain close by. \"We must hurry up\ 注意:

1. 续写词数应为150左右;

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1:

However, it was really not easy for them to find it.

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However, it was really not easy for them to find it. That’s because thick fog came, covering almost everything. They had to bend down to search for clues like blood splashes or footprints, which made them walk more slowly, ears sharper than usual. Suddenly, painful roars came to the rescuers and in front of them lay the young elephant. “Look! Unicorn!” Harry rushed forward, crying excitedly. It looked exhausted because a wound on its left front leg was bleeding badly.

Without delay, Harry knelt down to do first aid on its wound with David holding the flashlight. Fortunately, everything needed was available in the first aid kit. Calmly and skillfully, Harry conducted an operation on Unicorn immediately, and it seemed more obedient than before. Therefore, it didn’t take much time for Harry to stop the bleeding as an experienced rescuer. And after a while, Unicorn was able to stand up and walked away. It was rescued! Waving goodbye to it, Harry and David felt relieved. At this moment, the whole forest woke up, the moonlight fading while winds singing welcome to the dawn. 【分析】

本文以时间为线索展开,讲述了两个生物多样性救援人员哈利和大卫在半夜接到任务前去搜寻并营救森林里唯一的一头野生象的故事。 【点睛】

They had to bend down to search for clues like blood splashes or footprints, which 【高分句型1】

made them walk more slowly, ears sharper than usual.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】At this moment, the whole forest woke up, the moonlight fading while winds singing welcome to the dawn.(运用了while引导的时间状语从句) 六、读后续写06

(2022·湖南岳阳·一模)

阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Jackson, a 6th grader was heartbroken about his grandpa’s diagnosis, He and his grandfather, spent a lot of time together. Grandpa taught him things like how to play golf and how to drive a boat. When Jackson found out this Papa had been diagnosed with cancer, his world collapsed. ’

Grandpa Rick loved styling his hair but with the chemotherapy(化疗)treatments, his hair stared getting really thin. Jackson knew his grandpa felt pretty disheartened about losing his hair. So, he decided to do something to cheer him up and make him feel less alone. He couldn’t make cancer go away, but he could support his grandpa during his treatments. He decided to shave his own head and told his grandpa he wouldn't be alone, and that he wouldn’t be the only one losing his hair.

However, at school the next day, Jackson’s friends had a different attitude to his hairstyle. Some of his classmates teased and bullied him about his shaved head. One student call him “baldy” and another said “you look like having a cancer” At first, Jackson felt enraged at the comments, but his anger turned to sadness later on.

When Jackson got home from school, without saying anything, he locked himself in his room. His mother knocked at the door, asking what had happened. The door finally opened. Out he came. With disappointment on his face, he murmured, “My classmates made fun of my haircut. Nobody in this world could know my sorrow.” After saying these, he buried his face in his mother’s chest and burst out crying. The mother, too, felt angry and disappointed with the kids at school.

She decided to reach out to Principal(校长) Tom Hadley and tell him about her son being bullied. When he returned her call, he asked if she still had the clippers(理发剪) Jackson cut his hair with. Sue said “yes”, unsure of what he was going to do with this. Tom then asked if Jackson could bring the clippers to school the next day. 注意:

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The following day, the principal organized a gathering with all students at the school. said, “Jackson shaved his head to back his grandpa who has been diagnosed with cancer. But someone laughed at him.” He then asked the students to raise their hand if they’d ever known someone with

cancer. Almost everyone in the room raised their hands. Hadley continued, “It is wrong for us to judge somebody else's reaction to that, and we can do better. In standing up for Jackson and showing my support for his grandpa, I’ve offered to let Jackson shave my head today.”

Hadley then sat in a chair in front of all the students while Jackson shaved his head. The students seemed moved. The principal ended his speech by saying: “Support each other, love each other. We’re a family, that's why we're here. We're family—that's what we do; we support each other, good times and bad. I want to see more good times than bad, but I’m here either way.” It was these touching words that all the students in the room would never forget. 【分析】

本文以人物为线索展开,讲述六年级的学生杰克逊在他的爷爷化疗掉发时,也剃光自己的头发,却遭到同学们的嘲笑,这使他很伤心。妈妈告知校长汤姆·哈德利,校长召集学生开会,以此为契机,也剃光了头发,以实际行动支持鼓励杰克逊,并强调一个集体中要相亲相爱,使得学生们铭记在心。 【详解】 1.段落续写: ①由第一段 【点睛】

[高分句型1] Jackson shaved his head to back his grandpa who has been diagnosed with cancer. (由who引导的限制性定语从句,动词不定式作目的状语)

[高分句型2]It was these touching words that all the students in the room would never forget.(运用了强调句) 七、读后续写07

(2022·广东肇庆·二模)

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was sitting at my desk surrounded by New Year gifts, feeling happy that I had managed to buy some hard — to — find items. These were for Kids Need More, a charitable organization offering services to socially disadvantaged children. One of its most popular events is the Holiday Cheer Bus. The organization always fills the buses with donated gifts for the families on the Cheer Bus routes. Each bus is manned by a team of volunteers. My family had been volunteers for years. I had a list of the families on our route.

Just as I was packing up the items with my husband and my son, I received a call from the director of the organization. She asked if I could add a family to my route— here was a young mother, Leanne, and her son.

I called Leanne and told her that a Holiday Cheer Bus would be visiting her family. Leanne seemed really excited and began to cry. I comforted her, “The Holiday Cheer Bus is really going to come. Is there something special that your child would like?”

“My son is three. All he wants is a pair of Spider-Man snow boots so that he can play outside in the snow. ”

I asked about her son's shoe size. She told me the size and I promised I would have Spider-Man snow boots in size 9 for her son.

After I said goodbye and ended the call, panic set in. It was two days before the Holiday Cheer Bus was going on its run, less than a week before New Year. I was going to need a holiday miracle to find Spider-Man snow boots in size 9.

“We have to go shopping!\" I called out to my husband and son. They were surprised but still we set off. We went to a few department stores and the shoe departments, without success. We were tired and hungry. We were becoming disheartened. My son suggested giving Leanne a gift card so she could get the boots herself. But I didn't want to give up. I promised we would bring boots.

注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

At our final stop, expecting defeat, we entered the shoe department.

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Two days later, we arrived at the young mom's home.

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At our final stop, expecting defeat, we entered the shoe department. All we saw were empty shelves where the snow boots should be. As my husband searched in one area, I searched another. I looked down an aisle and saw a Spider-Man box. I ran down the aisle. As I got closer, I could not believe my eyes. On top of the Spider-Man box were black-and-red snow boots. I carefully lifted the tag and saw the size— a child’s size 9! We bought the boots. I was relieved we would be bringing snow boots to Leanne and her son.

Two days later, we arrived at the young mom’s home. As the bus pulled up to her home? her son ran through the cold, wet snow without boots for the last time. We handed him the boots and visited for a while. When it was time to leave for our next stop, Leanne waved us off with tears in her eyes. As we walked down the driveway, I heard her son delightfully ask if he could go out to play in the snow in his new boots. Although I didn’t hear, I guessed he would have been permitted and had a great time. 【解析】

本文以时间顺序展开,讲述了一个温暖的故事。作者一家都是慈善组织Kids Need More的志愿者,他们正在购置新年礼物,届时通过节日巴士造访需要帮助的家庭,给她们送去相应的礼物。组织负责人要在受助家庭列表中增加一户——一位母亲和她的儿子,作者了解到她们很需要一双9码的儿童雪地靴,一波三折之后终于圆了她们的心愿。 【点睛】

[高分句型1] All we saw were empty shelves where the snow boots should be.(运用了关系副词

where引导的限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Although I didn’t hear, I guessed he would have been permitted and had a great time.(运用了虚拟语气和although引导的让步状语从句)。

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