【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，文章讲述了一个小男孩在饥寒交迫的时候有一个女士给了他一杯牛奶，若干年后这个小男孩成为了一名医生，去救治那个送给他牛奶的女士。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：他穿着白大褂进入病房去见她…..，所以应该写他见到她躺在床上后的的反应即见到此景他会为她做什么。要详细叙述一下他为治疗她的病所做出的的努力；第二段开头是：账单送到了她的房间…..，首先写她见到账单后的心理，然后详述一下打开账单后账单的内容，要把一杯牛奶和账单巧妙的联系起来。 续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。 亮点
本文内容完整，表达条理，语言规范。文中使用了较多高级表达：1. She was afraid to open it because she was sure that it would take the rest of her life to pay it off.本句含because引的原因状语从句和that引导的宾语从句。 2.on the side of which a note caught her attention 使用了which引导的定语从句。 3.Tears of joy flooded her eyes as she prayed silently 此处是由as引导的时间状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus. Finally, there was only one family between us and the ticket counter.
This family made a big impression on me. There were eight children, all probably under the age of 12. You could tell they didn't have a lot of money.
Their clothes were not expensive, but they were clean. The children were well-behaved, all of them standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, holding hands. They were excitedly jabbering about the clowns, elephants, and other acts they would see that night.
One could sense they had never been to the circus before. It promised to be a highlight of their young lives. The father and mother were at the head of the pack, standing proud as could be.
The mother was holding her husband's hand, looking up at him as if to say, \"You're my knight in shining armor.\"
He was smiling and basking in pride, looking back at her as if to reply, \"You got that right.\"
The ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted. He proudly responded, \"Please let me buy eight children's tickets and two adult tickets so I can take my family to the circus.\"
The ticket lady quoted the price. The man's wife let go of his hand, her head dropped, and his lip began to shake. The father leaned a little closer and asked, \"How much did you say?\" The ticket lady again quoted the price. The man didn't have enough money.
How was he supposed to turn and tell his eight children that he didn‘t have enough money to take them to the circus?
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Actually we were not wealthy in any sense. So I understand how the kids would feel. I feel sorry for them. 注意： 1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右； 2. 应使用5个以上短文标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好； 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。 Paragraph 1 Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground. ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 That day my father and I went to our car and drove home without any tickets. ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 答案及解析： Then he Then he picked he picked it picked it up it up and up and tapped and tapped the tapped the man the man on man on the on the shoulder the shoulder and shoulder and said, and said, \"Excuse said, \"Excuse me, \"Excuse me, sir, me, sir, this sir, this fellout this fellout of fellout of your of your pocket.\" The man turned around and saw the moncy. He knew what was going on, helooked straight into my dad's eyes, took eyes, took my took my dads my dads hand dads hand in hand in both in both of both of his, of his, squeezed his, squeezed tightly squeezed tightly onto tightly onto the$20 onto the$20 bill, the$20 bill, and bill, and with and with his with his lip his lip sbaking lip sbaking and sbaking and a and a tear a tear running down his cheek, he replied, Thank you, thankyou, sir. This really means a lot to me and my family.\" We didnt go to the cireus that night, when I asked dad why he did so, Dad said, My child, it wasa desperate, heartbreaking and émbarrassing situation for a fatber. Surely he wasn't begging for ahandout, but he. reminded me mbarrassing situation for a fatber. Surely he wasn't begging for ahandout, but he. reminded me of my father, when 1 was young-\" * He paused for a while.as ifwandering in his memory. We should appreciate what we have obtained from life and seize everyopportunity to hclp others. We didnt go to the eircus tonight, but we didn't go without. Now, whowants an ice cream?\" 【详解】第一段所给首句，Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground.这一句是故事发展的转折点，接下来他应该是手里拿着20美元，眼含热泪表达感谢。无论从何角度续写需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。 第二段所给首句，That day my father and I went to our car and drove home without any tickets.接下来应该是问父亲为什么要这么做的时候，父亲做出了的回答。文章应从这一角度入手进行续写。 （五） （五） 读后续写 My fiance(未婚夫) and I were excited about shopping for our first home. But our funds were limited, and none of the houses in our price range seemed satisfactory. One agent recommended a house in particular. Although her description sounded wonderful, the price was beyond our range, so we declined(谢绝). But she kept urging us to have a look at last. 6 We finally did and it was love at first sight. It was our home, small and charming, overlooking a quiet lake. Walking through the rooms and talking with the owners, a nice elderly couple, we felt the warmth and happiness of the marriage within that home. As perfect as it was, the price remained too high for us. But every day, we would sit by the lake, looking at the house and dreaming of what it would be like to live there. Days later, we made an offer—, they didn’t laugh at us. They renewed their offer instead. It was offer—far below the asking price. Surprisinglyalso much more than we could afford, but far less than the original asking price. The next day, we got a disappointing message that another buyer had offered a much higher price. Even so, we decided to talk with the owners directly. We made our final offer, which still was thousands of dollars less than the other buyer’s bid(出价). We knew it, but we had to try. Nobody knew if we could get it. 注意：1. 所续写的短文的词数应为150词左右； 词左右； 2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: We went to the owner’s home after we made our final offer. _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: “ The owner looked at us and said, _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ 答案及解析： 13. Paragrph1： We went to the owner’s home after we made our final offer. The other potential buyer came with confidence. The owner smiled, saying, “Tell me the reason why you need this house. The one whose answer satisfies me will take the possession of it.” “For my business.” The buyer answered without any hesitation. After thinking for a while, I replied, “I can feel warmth and love of the marriage in the house, which I have been longing for.” Paragraph2： The owner looked at us and said, “I want to sell my house to you!” A surge（大量，汹涌）（大量，汹涌） of shock hit me. “Why? He offered a higher price than I could afford.” I asked, surprised. “I want to give it to those who can fill it surprised. “I want to give it to those who can fill it with love instead of money.” We appreciated him and felt a sense of warmth, deeply moved. I realized that a sincere heart was more significant than money. 7 【分析】 【分析】
本文是一篇续写类书面表达，对考生的要求极高，首先是语篇构思能力，其次是运用语言的能力。要求考生根据原文的脉络继续搭建故事的细节内容。这对夫妻非常喜欢这座房子，但是他们囊怀羞涩根本付不起高昂的价格，但是他们对房子的喜爱会让他们最终得到这座心爱的家。文章最终必然是一个出人意料的结尾。全文使用一般过去时，同时根据实际情况灵活运用时态。 尾。全文使用一般过去时，同时根据实际情况灵活运用时态。
【详解】第1步：审题。本文是一篇续写类书面表达，续写第一段中介绍他们最后一次出价并与竞争对手陈述购房的理由。第二段是房屋主人对两家陈述的评价以及最终的决定。 陈述购房的理由。第二段是房屋主人对两家陈述的评价以及最终的决定。
第2步：组织要点。第一段：这对夫妻购房的原因在于喜爱这栋房子，让他们有家的感觉；另外一对夫妻购房是想做生意。适当运用心里描写。第二段：房屋主人对两家的陈述进行评价，并给出最终的决定：把房子卖给我们。此类文章必然有出人意料的结尾，
第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行语篇构思，文章中出现的间接引语和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I woke I woke up woke up earlier up earlier than earlier than my than my brother my brother as brother as every as every other every other day other day of day of the of the week. the week. I week. I jumped I jumped out jumped out of out of the of the bed, the bed, got bed, got dressed, got dressed,
brushed my teeth, and had breakfast. Saying good bye to my mother, I got in the car no later than 7:05. I got to school on time, even though my brother came out of the house late as he used to.
It was a Thursday. I was walking to the chemistry rooms when my phone in my left pocket vibrated(震动). I took it out and looked at the shiny screen. As soon as I saw my father’s name on that screen I realized something me on that screen I realized something was not right.
He would not call me in the middle of a school day just to talk. He would want me to focus in school and do well. I answered the phone, and my father sounded worried. He told me to find my brother as soon as possible, walk with him to the school picking-up zone and get in the car with my brother. Our driver would take us back home where my father was.
When I was in the car with my brother my dad called the driver and told him to take us to the hospital. We were going my brother the change in plans, we were going to going to meet to meet him meet him and him and my and my mum my mum there. mum there. As there. As soon as As soon as my brother and brother and I and I found about I found about looked at each other in the eyes. I immediately noticed the fear in brother’s eyes.
To be honest, I was really scared too, probably more than he was. But I did not say anything. We arrived at the hospital. I saw my dad on the phone waiting for us at the entrance. He was smoking. Seeing my dad smoking made me more worried. I had never seen him smoke before. He hated it. As soon as he recognized the white car, he threw the cigarette away. I looked at my brother; he was looking out of the other window. I did not tell him what I just saw. I did not want him to worry.
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The car stopped right in front of my He opened the door and I jumped out of the car and hugged hin. He dad.
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noticed that I was worried right away and with a smile on his face told us he had a surprise for us. “What good things happen in hospital?” When we approached the ward, my dad told my brother and me to close our eyes and hold his hands. So we did. His warm hands made me feel more secure.
We walked down the hall with our eyes closed. Suddenly we stopped. When we walked into the room, my
father told us to open our eyes.We saw our mother lying on the bed. Tears welled up in my eyes, but I was not in pain. Right next to my mother I saw the most beautiful thing I had ever seen. It was a girl. She was sleeping. She was my sister. I still remember that day as one of the happiest days of my life.
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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Last weekend, I went to Mark’s new house nearby a forest for a little get-together. After lunch when I was chatting with him and his wife Cody, he asked me, “Hey Thoran, have you ever been to a secret spot?” Before I could even finish saying no, Cody and Mark were already at the door with their jackets on. And the next moment we were heading out into the forest with a camera, a fishing net and a plastic bucket（桶）.
We walked through the forest along a path by a small river. Breathing the fresh air, we three talked and laughed all the way.
“Hey! What are you guys doing?” Someone suddenly shouted from behind. Mark and Cody’s eyes immediately widened, and without a word they started running. I had no choice but to follow them, getting my shoes wet and dirty with mud. We probably ran for about 10 minutes before Mark and Cody slowed down. I stopped to catch my breath and asked, “Who was that?”
Mark replied, “The most annoying neighbor ever. If he caught up with us, there’s no telling what could happen. He is always making fun of us. I dislike him.” We kept walking on for a few more minutes. Then a beautiful lake appeared before our eyes. “Wow! Amazing!” I shouted and could hardly hold back my excitement. The lake was large and the water was deep and blue, looking so peaceful with tall trees around it. 注意： 注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1:
Looking around, we saw a rubber boat floating by the shore.
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“Help! Help! Help!” I was so frightened and cried for help.
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答案及解析： Paragraph 1: Looking around, we saw a rubber boat floating by the shore. “How about going boating?” Mark asked. “Good idea.” So we three excitedly jumped onto the boat and rowed far out. I was thrilled to find so many fishes in the lake. Before I could say a word, Mark had cast the fishing net into the water. “Let’s wait and see.” Mark smiled mysteriously. “Look this way. Let me take a photo of you two.” Cody said, taking out the camera. Hearing that, I quickly approached Mark. But all of a sudden I lost my balance and fell into the water. Paragraph 2: “Help! Help! Help!” I was so frightened and cried for help. However, none of us could swim. Mark and Cody tried to pull me up from the water but in vain. Struggling in the water, I was almost exhausted when I felt myself lifted by someone. It was Mark’s neighbor, who followed us there and saw what had happened. Without hesitation, he jumped into the water and I was saved. 【分析】 本文是一则读后续写。背景是上个周末，作者去了马克在附近森林的新房子，参加了一个小聚会。然后马克带作者来到一个秘密的地方。继续往前走了几分钟。然后，一个美丽的湖出现在眼前，湖很大，树很高，周围很安静…… Looking around, we around, we saw we saw a saw a rubber a rubber boat rubber boat floating boat floating by floating by the by the shore.the shore.从看到橡皮船入【详解】（1）第一段所给首句Looking around, 手，说明接下来可能要划船等等，但根据第二段首句可知，作者遇到了危险。无论从何角度拓展，需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。 与续写第二段首句呼应。 （2）第二段所给首句“Help! Help! Help!” I was so frightened and cried for help.根据首句可知，作者是遇到了危险，所以应该从“救人”入手来写续文。 入手来写续文。 （八） （八） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Honesty and Forgiveness On a winter afternoon, a friend and I were throwing stones onto the roof of the old lady’s house. The object of our play was to observe how the stones changed to missiles（导弹）as they rolled to the edge of the roof. I found myself a perfectly smooth rock and threw it out. The stone was too smooth, however, so it slipped from my hand as I let it go and headed straight not for the roof but for a small window on the old lady’s back porch. At the sound of crashed glass, we knew we were in trouble and ran away. I was too frightened of getting caught that first night to be concerned about the old lady with the broken window in winter. However, a few days later, when I was sure that I hadn’t been discovered, I started to feel guilty for her misfortune. She still greeted me with a smile each day when I gave her the paper, but I was no longer able to act comfortable in her presence. I made up my mind that I would save my paper delivery money, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10 注意： 注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为60-80词； 词；
2. 应使用4个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分为一段，开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 答案及解析：
I made up my mind that I would save my paper delivery money, and in three weeks I had the seven dollars to cover the cost of her window.I put the money in an envelope with a note explaining that I was sorry for breaking her window her window and window and hoped and hoped that hoped that the that the seven the seven dollars seven dollars would dollars would cover would cover the cover the cost the cost for cost for repairing for repairing it.I repairing it.I waited it.I waited until waited until it until it was it was dark,snuck_up to the old lady’s house,and put the letter I didn’t sign through the letter slot in her door.Once again,I
could have the freedom of looking straight into the old lady’s kind eyes.The next day,I handed the old lady her paper and was able to return the warm smile that I was receiving from her.She thanked me for the paper and gave me a me a bag a bag of bag of cookies of cookies she cookies she had she had made had made herself.Reaching made herself.Reaching for herself.Reaching for the for the cookies,I the cookies,I felt cookies,I felt an felt an envelope an envelope and envelope and pulled and pulled it pulled it out it out of out of the of the
bag.When I opened the envelope,I was surprised.Inside were the seven dollars and a short note that said,“I’m proud of you!” 【分析】
本题题型为读后续写，故事续写多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，要求故事完整，逻辑性强，它能充分激发学生的想象力，培养学生的创新思维能力。本文就是一篇故事续写，要求给出如下：所续写短文的词数为60-80词；使用4个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 续写完成后，所使用的关键词语用下划线标出。 语用下划线标出。
【详解】首先，在逻辑上，文章前半段对剧情的合理拓展非常符合情境：作者因打破了老人的窗玻璃感到后悔，决定将自己送报纸赚的钱攒齐作为赔偿。情节真实，增强了可读性。其次，在语言方面，文章使用
了多种句型，如I put the money in an envelope with a note explaining that I was sorry for breaking her window and hoped that the seven dollars would cover the cost for repairing it.一句中使用了两处宾语从句，又如I waited until it was dark, snuck up to the old lady’s house, and put the letter I didn’t sign through the letter slot in her door.waited…, snuck up…, snuck up…, and up…, and put…and put…多个谓语动词，使句子连贯紧凑。 句型的多变避免了句子的单一句中用了waited…, snuck
Once again, I again, I could I could have could have 调乏味，使文章更有灵性。同时，一些词汇的使用也使文章更为生动，贴切，如Once again,
the freedom of looking straight into the old lady’s kind eyes.其中once again一词用得十分传神，符合情境。 一词用得十分传神，符合情境。
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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A man came home from work late，tired and irritated（不耐烦的）（不耐烦的）, to find his 5-year-old son waiting for him at the door.
“Daddy, may I ask you a question?” “Yeah sure, what is it?” replied the man. “Daddy, how much do you make an hour?”
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“That's none of your business. Why do you ask such a thing?” the man said angrily.business. Why do you ask such a thing?” the man said angrily. “I just want to know. Please tell methe little boy. ，how much do you make an hour?” pleaded “If you must know, I make $20 an hour.” “Oh,” the little boy replied, with his head down. Looking up, hesaid, “Daddy, may I please borrow $10?” The father was angry, “If the only reason you asked that is so you can borrow some money to buy a silly toy or was angry, “If the only reason you asked that is so you can some other nonsense, then you march yourself straight to your room and go to bed. Think about why you are being so selfish. I work hard every day for such childish behavior.” The little boy quietly went to his room and shut the door. The man sat down and, started to get even angrier about the little boy's questions. How dare he ask such questions only to get some money? After about an hour or so, the man had calmed down, and started to think: Maybe there was something he really needed to buy with that $10 and he really didn't ask for money very often. The man went to the door of the little boy's room and opened the door. “Are you asleep, son?” He asked. “No, daddy, I'm awake,” replied the boy. “I've been thinking, maybe I was too hard on you earlier,” said the man. “It's been a long day and I took out my anger on you. Here's the $10 you asked for.”on you. Here's the $10 you asked for.” The little boy sat straight up, smiling. “Oh. Thank you, daddy!” He yelled. Then, reaching under his pillow he pulled out some crumpled(皱皱巴巴的) up bills. 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 左右； 2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: The man, seeing that the boy already had money started to get angry again. ________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Not knowing what his son meant, the father just stood there, waiting for his boy’s expl anation. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案及解析： Paragraph 1: selfish? The man, seeing that the boy already had money started to get angry “How can you be so again. Why do you want more money since you already have these bills?”The father could hardly hold his anger back and ?”The father could hardly hold his anger back and inquired with two eyebrows knitted into one. With held-back tears in his eyes, the little boy slowly and carefully counted out his money, and then looked up at his father, replying, “Because I didn’t have enough before, but now I do.” big blue eyes shining with tears. Paragraph 2: Wiping away Wiping away explanation. Not knowing what his son meant, the father just stood there, waiting for ’s his boy 12 his tears and an innocent smile appearing on his face, the boy requested in a relieved voice, “Daddy, I have $ 20 now. Can I buy an hour from you? Please come home early tomorrow. I want to have dinner with you. ” Hearing the boy’s small but sincere request, the father couldn’t help shedding tears. Realizing he was too busy with his business to spare some time with his beloved ones, he gathered his son into his arms and apologized again and again, “sorry…, and I promise I’ll be back early tomorrow.” 【分析】 试题分析：本文是一篇读后续写作文，考查学生的读写能力。要求考生用150词写出接下来的两段，且必须使用5个以上文章中标出的关键词语，并标出这些关键词。 个以上文章中标出的关键词语，并标出这些关键词。 【详解】考生在动笔前，一定要认真阅读所给故事，充分理解文字内容，认真看清题目要求，把握文章的脉络和串起文本的关键词，判断关键词语与主题内容的关联程度，在此基础上，确定要选用的词语以及所在的段落位置，判断故事情节发展的方向，写作下文。切记重点阅读每一段的首句，进行布局、解读。布局第一段的内容时，要兼顾两段的首句；第二段的首句决定第一段的走向。所写故事情节一定要连贯，要完整。同时注意综合运用语法与句法结构，按照行文逻辑组织语言，写作时要准确运用正确的时态。尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型，不要刻意追求运用高级、新颖的词汇，强行运用复杂句型等语法结构，而忽略了与原文语言环境的符合度和连贯度。最后也要注意不要出现单词拼写错误。 （十） （十） 读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 In the busy city of New York , such an amazing thing ever happened. On a cold Friday night , a poor artist stood at the gate of the subway station, playing his violin.. The young violinist was a student at an Arts College named Joseph, who did so every day in order to earn his tuition fees. He planned to attend advanced studies in Vienna and had booked the flight the next morning. Though the music was great, people were quickly going home for the weekend.. Joseph was playing his last chapter when a middle _aged man looking pretty excited slowed down his pace and put 50 dollarsnto the hat, for which Joseph was grateful.. nto the hat, for which Joseph was grateful.. iThe next night, the young artist came to the gate of the subway station as usual, and put his hat on the ground gracefully. Different from the day before , he took out a large piece of paper and laid it on the ground and put some stones on it. Then he began playing the violin. Before long , the young artist was surrounded with many passers—by , who Were all attracted by the words on that paper. It said, “Last night, a gentleman named George Sang put an unexpected thing into my hat by mistake. Please come to claim it as soon as possible.” It caused a great excitement and curiosity. They were dying to know what the unexpected thing could be.. After about half an hour, a middle _aged man ran there in a hurry and rushed through the crowd to the violinist and grabbed his shoulders and said, Yes, it”s you. You did come here. I knew that you are an honest man and would certainly come here.” The young violinist asked calmly ,”Are you Mr George Sang?” The man nodded .The violinist asked, “ Did you lose something?”dded .The violinist asked, “ Did you lose something?” “Lottery. It’s lottery,” replied the man. 13 The violinist took out a lottery ticket on which George Sang”s name was seen.。“Is it?” he asked . George nodded promptly and seized the lottery ticket and kissed it, and then he danced with Joseph. 注意：
1.所续写短文词数应为150左右
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语 3.续写部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 续写部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。 Paragraph 1:
The story turned out to be this: George Sang is an ordinary office clerk.
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This was the scene just now. Out of curiosity ,some passers _by asked Joseph__________________________ ———————————————————————————————————————— ————————————————————————————————————— 答案及解析：
The story turned out to be this: George Sang is an ordinary office clerk. He bought a lottery ticket the other day. To his surprise, he was exactly the lucky dog .Overjoyed, George took out 50 Dollars when hearing wonderful music on his way home. However, the lottery ticket was also thrown in. When Joseph was cleaning up his hat after ending a day’s Thinking the and a day’s work, day’s work, he work, he found he found thefound the unexpected thing. the unexpected thing. Thinking the owner Thinking the owner must owner must be must be anxious, be anxious, he anxious, he cancelled he cancelled the flight cancelled the flight returned to where he was given the lottery ticket.
This was the scene just now. Out of curiosity, some passersby asked Joseph why he didn’t take it for himself since he was badly in need of money. Joseph answered, “ It goes without saying that if I took it in a dishonest way , I would succeed temporarily. But in the long run , I am bound to be a loser.” Just as the saying goes , honesty is the best policy. Therefore we should bear in mind that being honest is what makes us a good man. 【分析】 【分析】
此文为读后续写，要求学生首先理解所给短文的文章内容以及深层含义，此外牢牢抓住关键词，为故事的后续发展设计合理的情节。
George Sang 为什么购买了彩票，为什么回来找这张彩票，是怎们把彩票扔到了【详解】第一段主要介绍George Sang
George Sang, Joseph, Sang, Joseph, the Joseph, the subway the subway station, subway station, a station, a lottery a lottery ticket lottery ticket ，这位年轻的小提琴手的帽子里的。此段中可用上George Sang, 50dallars 等词。
而第二段则围绕着这位年轻的提琴家为什么来归还彩票展开陈述。第二段可用上unexpected，honest等词赞扬这位年轻的小提琴家的诚实。
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（十一） （十一） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Jack，a clerk at the local bank，was wandering alone on the street. It was a cold，silent winter night. His mind was on his wife Linda，who had been in a car accident two months ago and was now lying in a hospital bed，waiting for more money for her operation．Jack had sold everything he had，and he had tried his best to borrow money from all the people and banks he could. But the real world is cruel. A large amount of money was still needed. To Jack，it would mean a great deal of suffering to see his wife die without any help.“I have only one option left，”Jack said to himself. Then he went to the bank，his workplace，again. For several days，he observed the bank and planned a theft． The next day，he went to work as usual. Everything seemed normal：he joked with his workmates and helped his clients as he always did. But no one noticed that he had brought a bigger suitcase to work，instead of the small one he always carried. At 5：00 pm，the bank closed，and the clerks and the guards had all gone home. However，at that moment，Jack was in the bathroom，and the guards didn't notice him，of course. When the noises coming from the street were replaced by silence and everything turned dark，Jack came out from the bathroom. He first cut the lines of the alarms and monitors with tools from his new suitcase. He was all too familiar with the equipment since he had been working there for 8 years and had been studying the security system for the past 30 days. Using a special key and some other tools，he then easily opened the doors of the safes. The bank's security system wasn't very good，which allowed Jack to take a lot of money. Several minutes later，Jack left the bank with a heavy bag filled with money. 注意： 注意： 1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1： After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while，the alarms began to ring. ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank，an old man. ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 答案及解析： 30. The police arrived at the After Jack had been gone from the bank for a ，whilethe alarms began to ring. 15 bank very quickly，only to find no one there. The next day was a really special day for the town，which was filled with newspaper with newspaper and newspaper and TV and TV reporters TV reporters covering reporters covering the covering the strange the strange theftstrange theft．The clerks The clerks at clerks at the at the bank the bank were bank were busy were busy discussing busy discussing the discussing the case，of coursepolice could only promise possible，even of course，including Jack. The police could only promise to promise to catch to catch the catch the thieves the thieves as thieves as soon as as soon as though no clues had been found yet. He seemed to be the only person to But the most unlucky man was the manager of the ，bankan old man. blame and was removed from his position. At last，with enough money for her operation，Jack's wife was saved. However，Jack felt guilty about the manager of the bank. He could not forget what he had done to the old man. His guilt deepened as time went by. Finally，he turned himself in to the police and accepted his punishment. 【分析】 【分析】 续写分析：前文提到Jack为了给妻子动手术，利用自己的便利成功盗取了银行的钱，他带着一个装满钱的沉重袋子离开了银行。 After Jack had Jack had been had been gone been gone from gone from the from the bank the bank for bank for a for a whilea while，the alarms the alarms 【详解】续写线索：（1）第一段所给首句After Jack began to began to ring.to ring.这是故事发展的一个转折点，接下来警报会开始响起来，会很快赶到银行，随后报纸和电视记者，报道了这起奇怪的盗窃事件。当然，银行的职员们正忙着讨论这个案子，包括杰克。无论从何角度拓展，需注意要与续写第二段首句呼应。 （2）第二段所给首句But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank，an old man.银行被窃最不幸的人应该是银行经理，而杰克因为有了钱他妻子做了手术，他妻子得救，而杰克本意是为了救妻子，现在妻子得救，他接受了应有的惩罚。 （十二） （十二） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Lorena parted the curtain in her living room and looked out onto the wet street. She was relieved the sunlight appeared. If it didn’t stop raining it would ruin her day. Her mother had promised to drive her to Fashion Fair if it were sunny. Lorena was desperate to go there because she had to replace a Nike jacket. Earlier that Wednesday afternoon, Eddie, the most popular seventh-grader, had given Lorena his jacket and asked her to keep an eye as he would play basketball in a hurry. Lorena was quite happy to be of help. During her last class, the biology teacher made them cut apart dead frogs. For fear of getting blood on Eddie’s jacket, Lorena folded it and placed it on a chair. Then she took the knife and cut the skin quickly. She felt sick opening the frog’s belly. When the bell rang Lorena hurried out because the bus she caught for home left ten minutes after school. She raced to board the bus and found a seat. After a few minutes the driver started the engine and drove away when Lorena looked out of the window and saw Eddie. “The jacket!” she screamed. She shot from her seat and ran up to the driver. “You’ve got to stop! I forgot Eddie’s jacket!” “Who’s Eddie? I don’t know no Eddie,” the driver said crossly. “Sit down.” All that evening she was upset and blamed her biology teacher for her problem. If he hadn’t made them dissect-minded. The next day Lorena rushed from the bus to the biology （解剖）frogs, she wouldn’t have been so absent 16 room. The jacket was not there! “How can I ever tell Eddie?” she closed her eyes. She spent most of her break and lunch period in the rest room, brushing her hair and worrying. On Friday she stayed home to avoid Eddie. She told her mother she wanted to go shopping to buy her a gift for her birthday, which was the next week. Actually, she wanted to buy a Nike jacket with her life savings at Fashion Fair. 注意： 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 左右； 2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: Mom drove Lorena to Fashion Fair and left, asking her not to waste money. Paragraph 2: Lorena was about to leave when she saw Eddie in his Nike jacket. 答案及解析： 31. Possible version 1: Mom drove Mom drove Lorena drove Lorena to Lorena to Fashion to Fashion Fair Fashion Fair and Fair and left, and left, asking left, asking her asking her not her not to not to waste to waste money. waste money. Lorena money. Lorena promised Lorena promised and promised and ran and ran in. ran in. Stopping at a rack of Nike jackets, she wondered what size Eddie wore. She tried one on and found the sleeves coming down over her hands. She felt it must be the size. She walked to the cash register and paid the money. She was overjoyed to have settled the problem. Then she headed for the perfume department to buy a gift for Mom. It was too bad she didn’t have enough money! [78 words] Lorena was about to leave when she saw Eddie in his Nike jacket. With a tight face, Eddie scolded Lorena why she had left his jacket in the biology room. “I thought we could be friends,” he complained. “I can explain,” Lorena begged. Lorena begged. “You’re begged. “You’re of “You’re of no of no help no help at help at all!” at all!” Eddie all!” Eddie rushed Eddie rushed off. rushed off. “What off. “What the “What the hell’s the hell’s going hell’s going on?” going on?” Lorena on?” Lorena wondered. Lorena wondered. Realizing some people could never be friends, she wiped her eyes, returned the jacket, bought Mom some cheese instead of the romantic perfume and went home. [72 words] Possible version 2: Mom drove Lorena to Fashion Fair and left, asking her not to waste money. Waving goodbye to Mom, Lorena ran for a Nike store. Entering the door, she had a quick glance around. Her heart sank when she found nothing familiar in familiar in sight. in sight. Still, sight. Still, she Still, she combed she combed every combed every corner every corner of corner of the of the store the store for store for the for the jacket the jacket she jacket she wanted she wanted but wanted but in but in vain. in vain. Finally, vain. Finally, she Finally, she turned to turned to the to the assistant the assistant for assistant for help. for help. Knowing help. Knowing what Knowing what Lorena what Lorena wanted, Lorena wanted, the wanted, the assistant the assistant promised assistant promised to promised to place to place an place an order an order for order for her, for her, saying it should be ready two days later. Overjoyed, Lorena paid the advance. （79 words） 17 Lorena was about to leave when she saw Eddie in his Nike jacket. Instantly her eyes met his, Eddie cast his eyes away. eyes away. Then away. Then Lorena Then Lorena found Lorena found beside found beside him beside him standing him standing a standing a beautiful a beautiful girl, beautiful girl, talking girl, talking merrily talking merrily with merrily with her with her hand her hand in hand in his. in his. Mind his. Mind blank, Lorena made her way to the bus stop, forgetting all about the gift for her mom and to ask Eddie why the jacket found jacket found its found its way its way back way back on back on him on him now. him now. Eventually now. Eventually when Eventually when her when her consciousness her consciousness came consciousness came back, came back, she back, she wondered she wondered what wondered what she what she should do next. (71 words) Possible version 3: Mom drove Lorena to Fashion Fair and left, asking her not to waste money. “I must find the same jacket and give it back to Eddie because I have to live up to his faith in me,” thought Lorena. She searched the whole fair for the jacket but in vain. There was no jacket exactly the same. She was trapped in a really struggling situation and was at a loss how to deal with the problem. Finally, she decided to try her luck in another market. (72 words) Lorena was about to leave when she saw Eddie in his Nike jacket. Lorena felt desperate to explain when Eddie came forward and blamed Lorena for her irresponsibility. “Please forgive me. How I regretted being so stupid to have left your jacket in the biology room!” apologized Lorena, shame-faced and self-condemned. Hearing Lorena’s sincere apology and knowing what she had done to make up, Eddie gave Lorena a warm hug, saying that nothing could match a friendship cherished by both sides. Then, they went to select a gift for Lorena’s mother. (78 words) Possible version 4: Mom drove Lorena to Fashion Fair and left, asking her not to waste money. Promising she wouldn’t , Lorena ran hurriedly into a Nike store. To her delight, she soon found the same jacket that Eddie wore. “Thank goodness! Now I don’t need to avoid Eddie any longer,” thought Lorena, picturing how Eddie would react when seeing the brand-new jacket. After paying the money, Lorena left for a gift store. She felt relieved to find she still had enough money for a delicate silk scarf. With the scarf gift wrapped, she pushed the door open. [80 words] Lorena was Lorena was about was about to about to leave to leave when leave when she when she saw she saw Eddie saw Eddie in Eddie in his in his Nike his Nike jacket. Nike jacket. Her jacket. Her smile Her smile froze smile froze as froze as she as she noticed she noticed Eddie noticed Eddie wearing a long face. Eddie asked Lorena angrily why she left his jacket in the biology room. Lorena apologized to him and explained she didn’t do it on purpose. But Eddie simply didn’t believe what she said. Before she could show the new jacket, Eddie rushed off, saying they would never be friends. Tears streamed down her face when she heard these remarks. [70 words] （十三） （十三） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 It was time to go home. “Remember to work on your class speeches for homework,” Miss Walker called as everyone started talking and packing their school bags. Jenny felt sick. She hated having to read aloud in class. She was sure everyone got really bored listening to her. Once, when Jenny was reading out her holiday diary, Lee was even looking at his watch, a silver and blue one which seemed just magical. Jenny watched Lee walk ahead of her as they left school. He seemed so clever, and he had a certain sort of shining confidence. He was just one of those people who were good at everything. Jenny sighed. As she turned the comer, she saw Lee’s watch lying right in the middle of the path. Jenny knew she should just pick it up and return it to him, but she didn’t want 10 nm after him. Jenny bent down quickly, picked up the watch and ran home. On arriving home, Jenny put it on almost without thinking. She was surprised it fitted so well. She walked to the mirror and started practicing her speech. Words just flooded out of 18 her. “I’m going to talk about swimming. I have been lucky. I’ve won lots of competitions. But when I’m in a race, I’m not really thinking about winning. I’m just loving the feeling of being in the water…” Jenny laughed with excitement. She walked across the room. She suddenly seemed to have a certain sort of confidence. Turning back to the mirror, Jenny saw a flash of light from the watch in the glass. The flashes of silver seemed almost magical. So maybe Lee’s watch really DID have something magic about it. The next day, as the lesson began, Miss Walker asked who was going to be brave and go first. Nobody moved. Jenny slowly raised her arm. Before Miss Walker could say anything, there was a shout from behind. “She’s stolen my watch!” Leesaid angrily, “It went missing at school yesterday.” 注意： 1所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 左右； 2应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1： Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny’s speech first. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案及解析： Possible version 1: Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation. Jenny didn’t answer. How could she explain about the watch and its magic? No one could understand. No one could believe. “But I saw you wearing it yesterday,” Miss Walker gently reminded him. For a moment Lee remained silent and then he apologized he had just remembered that. Jenny was relieved saying she had found it on the way home and decided to return it after the speech. Everybody was puzzled and asked why. Jenny again was speechless. At that, Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny’s speech first. Jenny walked slowly to the front. She couldn’t think properly. All round her, a sea of faces was watching. She felt so frightened and the watch didn’t seem magical at all. Suddenly she saw Miss Walker’s encouraging eyes. Jenny took a deep breath. “I’m going to talk about swimming…” Ten minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jenny’s wonderful speech. Jenny swimming…” Ten minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jenny’s wonderful speech. Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real source of confidence. Possible version 2: Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation. Embarrassed, Jenny didn’t say anything. Dead silence suddenly fell. Then came Miss Walker’s voice. “Why is Lee’s watch on your wrist?” Jenny hesitated for a while and decided to tell everybody about the truth. However, thinking of the well-prepared speech, the magic 19 of the watch, she changed her mind. “But Miss Walker, could I give the speech first and then explain?” She made a request in a tone of begging. At that, Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny’s speech first. Jenny made her way to the platform with every confidence. Words began to flood out of her. “How could she make it? We’ve never seen Jenny give so terrific a speech.” Whispers went around the classroom, and even Miss Walker nodded with approval. Immediately Jenny finished her speech, a storm of applause erupted from the class. Relieved, Jenny told everyone the truth, and especially the magic of the watch. “But it’s just an ordinary watch with no magic”, Lee announced. （十四） （十四） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Christmas was the one day of the year when the children did not work and received a gift. A gift for each child-something to call their own. This special gift was an orange. John had been in the orphanage（孤儿院）long enough to look forward with delight and expectations of this special day of Christmas and to the orange he would receive. In Old England, and to John and his orphan friends, an orange was a rare and special gift. It had an unusual aroma（芳香）of something they smelled only at Christmas. The children prized it so much that they kept it for several days, weeks, and even months-protecting it, smelling it, touching it and loving it. Usually they tried to taste and preserve it for so long that it often rotted before they ever peeled（剥皮）it to enjoy the sweet juice. John usually slept with his next to his pillow. He would put it right by his nose and smell of its goodness, holding it gently and carefully as not to bruise（擦伤）it. He would dream of children all over the world smelling the sweet aroma of oranges. It gave him security and a sense of well being, hope and dreams of a future filled with good food and a life different from this poor existence. This year John was overjoyed by the Christmas season. He was becoming a man. He knew he was becoming stronger and stronger and soon and soon he soon he would he would be would be old be old enough old enough to enough to leave. to leave. He leave. He was He was excited was excited by excited by this by this anticipation this anticipation and anticipation and excited and excited about excited about Christmas. He would save his orange until his birthday in July. If he preserved it very carefully, kept it cool and did not drop it, he might be able to eat it on his birthday. Christmas day finally came. The children were so excited as they entered the big dining hall. John could smell the unusual aroma of meat. In his excitement and because of his oversized feet, he tripped, causing much noise among other children. 注意： 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 3. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: Immediately, he heard the master roaring, “John, leave the hall and there will be no orange for you this year.” ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Then in came Little Elizabeth. 20 ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 答案及解析： One possible version:
Immediately, he heard the master roaring. “John, leave he hall and there will be no orange for you this year.” John’s heart broke violently wide open. He began to cry. He turned and wet swiftly back to the cold room and his corner so other children would not see his pain.
With a smile on her face and tears in her eyes, she held out a piece of rag to Then in came Little Elizabeth.
John. “Here John,” she said, “This is for you.” As he lifted back the edges of the rag, he saw a big juicy orange all John. “Here John,” she said, “This is for you.” As he lifte
peeled and peeled and quartered… and quartered… Only quartered… Only then Only then did then did he did he realize he realize what realize what they what they had they had done. had done. Each done. Each lad Each lad sacrificed lad sacrificed their sacrificed their own their own orange own orange by orange by
sharing a quarter and had created a big, beautiful orange for him. John never forgot the sharing, love and personal sacrifice his friends had show that Christmas day. In memory of this, many years after he left the orphanage, he would send oranges to the children there as special Christmas gifts.
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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Justin and Mary woke up early, even though they were vacationing at their uncle's lake house. The night before, Uncle Thomas told them about the Foggy Figure that haunts (经常出没于) the lake. Justin and Mary were determined to see the ghostly creature before their vacation was over.
“Is it foggy outside?” Mary asked, as Justin carefully looked out the window. “Yup! Let's go!” Justin let go of the curtain and rushed to the door with Mary.
It was only 5:00 a. m., so everyone else in the house was still asleep. As they moved quietly through the kitchen to the back door, Mary sniffed the air. It had the faint scent (气味) of coffee and something sweet. A sense of hunger struck her. \"Maybe we should first have a breakfast, \"she thought. But she still followed Justin out the door, down the back steps, and out onto the boat dock (码头). The fog had settled over the lake, making it impossible to see anything.
\"Do you see anything?\" Mary asked, moving forward for a closer look. \"Nothing. Do you think Uncle Thomas was just trying to scare us with that story?”
Uncle Thomas did have a good imagination. He'd been telling Justin and Mary stories for years, but this was the first scary story. Mary had a feeling it wasn't made up.
Mary shook her head. “Remember what Uncle Thomas said? The Foggy Figure haunts the lake. We're on the dock. Maybe that's why we can't see him. The people in the story were in boats.”
“You want to take a boat ride on the water?” Justin asked.
Mary looked around, trying to find Uncle Thomas's boat, but the fog was too thick. “Mom and Dad will be really angry if we go out on the lake alone in this fog,” Justin said.
Mary shrugged (in the boat while it's docked. That 耸肩). “Maybe we don't have to go anywhere. We could sit wouldn't be dangerous.”
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“Okay.” Justin moved toward the end of the dock. He could barely see the outline of the boat. “I’ll go first.” 注意
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1
Justin carefully lowered himself into the boat and then reached for Mary’s hand.
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Paragraph 2
Justin and Mary hugged each other in fear, but then…
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Justin carefully lowered himself into the boat and then reached for Mary’s hand. Mary climbed into the boat and sat beside him. She was getting nervous now that they were on the water. “See anything?” They looked around, and gradually, the fog began to lift. Mary turned around and screamed. “The Foggy Figure!” It was in the boat with them!
Justin and Mary hugged each other in fear, but then they heard a laugh. Justin moved toward the Foggy Figure. “Uncle Thomas?” “I knew that story would get you two out of bed early enough to take a boatride with me.” Mary sighed, happy there was no Foggy Figure after all. Justin looked relieved, too. Uncle Thomas laughed. “What do you say? I packed a breakfast for us.” Mary smiled. She had smelled the scent of coffee. And Uncle Thomas had packed sweet cakes for them, too. “Let’s do it,” Mary and Justin said.akes for them, too. “Let’s do it,” Mary and Justin said. 本文是一篇任务型写作，要求续写短文。所续写短文的词数应为150左右；应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。本文应主要使用一般过去时态。写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型，注意行文的连贯和逻辑性。根据第一段所给段落首句Justin carefully lowered himself into the boat and then reached for Mary’s hand.（贾斯汀小心翼翼地把自己放进船里，然后伸手去拿玛丽的手。）可知，下面是要描述两个人（贾斯汀小心翼翼地把自己放进船里，然后伸手去拿玛丽的手。）可知，下面是要描述两个人都上船之后的事。根据第二段所给段落首句Justin and Mary hugged each other in fear, but then …推知，事情应该出现转机。
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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Twenty years ago, I drove a taxi for a living. One night I went to pick up a passenger at 2:30 a. m. When I arrived to collect, I found the building was dark except for a single light in a ground floor window.
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I walked to the door and knocked, \"Just a minute,\" answered a weak, elderly voice. After a long time, the door opened. A small woman in her eighties stood before me. By her side was a small suitcase. I took the suitcase to the car, and then returned to help the woman. She took my arm and we walked slowly towards the car. She kept thanking me for my kindness. \"It's nothing,\" I told her. \"I just try to treat my passengers the way I would want my mother treated.\" \"Oh, you're such a good man.\" She said. When we got into the taxi, she gave me an address, and then asked, \"Could you drive through downtown?\" \"It's not the shortest way,\" I answered quickly. \"Oh, I'm in no hurry,\" she said. \"I'm on my way to a hospice (临终医院). I don't have any family left. The doctor says I don't have very long. \" I quietly reached over and shut off the meter (计价器). For the next two hours, we drove through the city. She showed me the building where she had once worked, the neighborhood where she had lived, and the furniture shop that had once been a ballroom where she had gone dancing as a girl. Sometimes she'd ask me to slow down in front of a particular building and would sit staring into the darkness, saying nothing. At dawn, she suddenly said, \"I'm tired. Let's go now.\" We drove in silence to the address she had given. \"How much do I owe you?\" she asked. \"Nothing.\" I said. \"You have to make a living,\" she answered. \"Oh, there are other passengers,\" I answered. She said thanks to me, but she looked so sad. 注意： 1.所续写的短文词数应为所续写的短文词数应为150左右； 2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好； 4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Almost without thinking, I bent and gave her a hug. Almost without thinking, I bent and gave her a hug. Para 1: I was on my way to visit her. I was on my way to visit her. Para 2: 答案及解析： Paragraph1 Almost without thinking, I bent and gave her a hug. She held onto me tightly. Before the woman left for the hospice, I said to her, “My mother treated everyone kindly and she is a person of great kindness, but she passed away years ago. You are like my mother,” the woman said, “ Thank you. If you want to visit me,I’ll tell you my 23 story.” Then the weak woman left, after which I drove the taxi to go home. Paragraph 2
The next day, I was on my way to visit her. The old woman told me that she used to be a millionaire. She became immersed in making money. She was the owner of a particular building we saw last night. But she
neglected her family. Her only son died one year ago because of cancer. She sold everything to save him, but failed. How sadshort, but please be in no hurry. Though everyone has to earn ！At last, the old woman said to me, “Life is money to make a living, always remember that family is the most important thing to you,” After a long silence in the darkness, I nodded hard.
试题分析：本文为读后续写。文章讲述的是作者去接了一个即将即开这个世界的老人去医院，路上对老人非常友善，并免费带老人去市中心转了一圈。文章给了两段的第一句话用来提示，学生可据此展开联想。注意要求词数应为150左右；应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；续写完成后，要用下划线标出关键词语。
【亮点说明】Before the woman left , I said to her,时间状语从句用在句中；If you want to visit me,I’ll tell you my story.The old woman told me that she used to be a millionaire.She
条件状语从句用在其中；使用宾语从句；
was the owner of aparticular buildingwe saw last night.Though everyone has to earn money 定语从句运用巧妙；to make a living, always remember that family is the most important thing to you, Though引导的让步状语从句和宾语从句完美结合；另外，续写内容符合要求，结构严谨，前后呼应，文中关键词使用得当。
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