1．基本要求：就一般性话题或提纲在半小时内写出120词的短文，内容基本完整、用词恰当，语篇连贯。
2．评分标准及相应的要求
14分—— 切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。
11分—— 切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。（单复数，冠词，拼写，大小写）
8分 —— 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚, 文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。（时态混乱，句子成分搭配不当）
5分 —— 基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。
2分 —— 条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。
*卷面要求：字体端正清晰、易于辨认；规范大小写；词间空格，段前缩进；正确使用标点符号；避免拼写错误，减少涂改。
*内容要求：语言上，关键在于变化，变化不分难易，只要有变化就行。变化分为词的变化和句的变化。在用词上，同一文章中，相同意义的词要争取不断的用近义词替换。
7种万能写作模板
现象/观点阐释型
现象/观点阐释型作文要求考生就某一事物或者现象进行客观的分析和评论。要求分析某一社会现象出现的原因或存在的问题并结合实际情况具体说明自己的看法和建议。此类作文的基本结构如下：第一段简述某一现象（即提出文章讨论的主题）。第二段分析产生该现象的原因或存
在的问题（写作的重心，需要从多方面进行阐述）。第三段提出号召、建议或解决方案。
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（某社会现象或问题）has increasingly become a common concern of the public. (用一句话具体描述该社会现象). However, (该社会现象引发的问题).
The reasons for this are obvious. The primary reason, presumably, is that (产生该现象的原因1). The second reason is that (产生该现象的原因2).
Personally, I think (该社会现象) should be controlled because it (该现象产生的社会问题). To improve the present situation, (解决该社会问题的方法或措施).
On Excessive Packaging
Excessive packaging has increasingly become a common concern of the public. A package is supposed to serve as a cover of the product to keep it clean and prevent it from being damaged. However, most of the current packages have already surpassed the mere function of packaging.
The reasons for this are obvious. The primary reason, presumably, is that the manufacturers attempt to attract potential customers with delicate packaging, or to cover up the inferior quality of the product. The second reason is that the consumers want to show their sincerity and elegance with beautifully packaged gifts.
Personally, I think excessive packaging should be controlled because it conceals the quality of the product, consumes a lot of resources and adds much to the cost of the good. To improve the present situation, manufacturers had better distinguish family packaging from gift packaging separately so that consumers could make choices according to their own needs.
图表/图片作文型
这种题型要求学生在描述图片、图表的基础上，分析相关现象或问题等，并加以评论。看懂图表和图片所要表达的意思，尤其重要。图表若是数据型，那些“极端数字”（即最大最小值、最高最低点、基本相同点以及完全相反点等等）往往是反映问题的关键。描写这种图表时切忌堆砌数据，只要把最能说明问题的数据描述出来即可。
此类作文开头段一般是简单描述图片、图表并指出其反映的现象或问题。接着分析其原因、造成的影响等，最后表达作者的看法。
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As is shown in the picture, (简述图片主要内容). It reminds me of (图片对自己的启示，并顺带引出主题).
As it is, (概述自己的观点). To be specific, (论据1). Moreover, (论据2). Take (某人/某物) as an example. (具体阐述该例子).
All in all, (重申观点，总结全文).
评论引言型
评论引言型作文要求对引用的话进行评论，并发表个人观点。引用的话可能是普通的话语，也可能是谚语名言。评论引言、名言型作文一般要求从该言论中提炼出主题，然后用实例进行论证，最后进行简单总结。评论谚语型作文则要求在开篇引出谚语并做适当的诠释，接着从多方面举例论证。但某些谚语或名人言论也不一定正确，若是题目没有设定文章的基调，驳斥谚语或者名人的观点也是一种写作思路，但要注意一定要有理有据。
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Maybe most of us have heard of the saying, “(引言).” But have you ever thought about its implication Undoubtedly, (主题、个人观点).
Those who claim to (对某类人的行文进行分析论证). It is … that… (用强调句的形式，从正面对主题进行论证).
(简单作结). Nonetheless, (重申观点).
Write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I have done it hundreds of times.
Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will
Maybe most of us have heard of the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the
easiest thing in the world. I have done it hundreds of times.” But have you ever thought about its implication Undoubtedly, nothing succeeds without a strong will.
Those who claim to have practiced smoking-quitting for hundreds of times fail to have a strong will. Without a strong will, one can never give up smoking once and for all, not to mention being successful in other endeavors. It is a strong will that contributes to the success of the Olympic winners, that results in the spectacular victory of the 2010 World Expo(世博会), and that leads to the successful exploration of the moon.
Where there is a will, there is a way. Nonetheless, only when the will is strong enough will the way lead us to success.
分析利弊型
分析利弊型作文要求分析某一事物或者现象的利于弊，然后发表个人的观点。此类作文的基
本结构如下：第一段引出某一现象。第二段分析该现象的利弊。第三段权衡利弊看，提出自己的看法或建议。
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(某社会现象)has become a fashion trend. Almost everyone has experienced (该现象) –some even have got accustomed to it. However, while making our life easier, it may bring us problems as well.
(列举正面例子，说明该现象的好处).
Nevertheless, (列举负面例子，说明该现象的坏处). What can you do in order to eat the fish and avoid the bones
Think before (行动), and don’t allow room for (呼吁不要做的事情).
Online Shopping
Online shopping has become a fashion trend. Almost everyone has experienced online shopping—some even have got accustomed to it. However, while making our life easier, it may bring us problems as well.
Goods ranging from fruit to steak, from a book to an intensive training program, from a film ticket to a package tour can all be purchased without leaving one’s home, which saves all the traffic jams, parking inconvenience and queuing time.
Nevertheless, goods or services of poor quality, fake products or even Internet frauds may consume rather than save our time, energy and money, turning our online shopping experience into a nightmare.
Think before you order, and don’t allow room for products without signs to show
their manufacturing time and place, products of unbelievably low price and products free of charge to spoil your life.
观点对照型
观点对照型作文要求考生就某一事物或现象陈述两种不同的观点，然后表明自己的看法。这类作文一般有两种写作模式。一种是，把写作重点放在描述两种不同的观点上，然后简要说明“我”的看法。另一种则相反，简述存在的两种不同观点，然后选取其中一种观点予以支持，并详细论述。
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(某社会现象或事物) is one of China’s most (影响力). However, in recent years, (该现象或事物) is losing its appeal, especially to youngsters.
People in increasing numbers choose not to (相关做法). They claim that (反对观点). However, some other people are (支持者). They argue that (理由1). What’s more, (理由2).
(该现象或事物现在的情况), I myself (表达自己的观点). Yet to maintain (给出改进意见). For example, it’s a good idea to (举例说明).
Spring Festival Gala on CCTV
The CCTV Spring Festival Gala is one the China’s most popular annual television events, watched by millions of people on the eve of the lunar New Year. However, in recent years, the 4-hour show is losing its appeal, especially to youngsters.
People in increasing numbers choose not to watch the show. They claim that the stereotyped Gala should give way to diverse modern celebrations. However, some other
people are faithful audience of it. They argue that the Evening Gala has somewhat become a tradition since it was initiated in the 1980s. What’s more, watching the show is an indispensable part of the festival for them.
Though the Gala is no longer popular with young generation, I myself enjoy watching the show with my family. Yet to maintain the interest of the young generation, the organizing committee should develop a program more exciting, more colorful and more entertaining than the previous ones. For example, it’s a good idea to invite some big names in China’s film and music industries to perform on the Gala stage.
问题解决型
问题解决型作文要求分析某个问题或现象的成因、危害，提出解决问题的方法或建议。在这类作文中，文章的重心应罗在问题的原因分析或解决办法上。
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Nowadays, (描述某一社会现象). However, instead of (该现象带来的好处), such deeds (该现象造成的不良后果).
In order to (消除该现象造成的不良影响), (某一类人) are supposed to (提出建议1). Besides, it is advisable that (提出建议2). Last but not least, (某一类人) should (提出建议3).
It is hopeful that all (某一类人) realize (该现象造成的后果), and find a more sensible way to (消除不良影响).
How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent
Nowadays, a lot of parents are overdoing in taking care of their children. From doing laundry to job hunting, they have made every effort. However, instead of making life
easier for the next generation, such deeds deprive the youth of opportunities to grow independent.
In order to cultivate a sense of independence in their children, parents are supposed to first stop doing what the youngsters are able to do for themselves. Besides, it is advisable that parents expose their children to more difficulties and failures on purpose, helping them to learn valuable lessons from setbacks. Last but not least, parents should help their children develop a sense of responsibility.
It is hopeful that all parents realize an independent soul dies in a bed of roses and find a more sensible way to love their kids.
应用书信型
书信包括投诉信、询问信、道歉信、感谢信、求职信等。写英文书信应开门见山地点明写信
的目的，信中所谈的事情要具体、准确、同时语言上要言简意赅。写信还应注意措辞礼貌，语气应诚恳，尽可能考虑对方的感受，多使用please, would, could, may等词。一封完整的书信通常包括：日期、称呼、正文、结束语和署名五个部分。
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Dear (称呼),
I am very glad to receive your letter and feel grateful for (对方提供的优待). (肯定对方提供的优待), I regret to say that I can’t accept your gracious offer.
The main reason of my decision is that (原因1). The second reason is that (原因2).
But I still want to express again my deep gratefulness to your offer. (表达良好祝愿).
Sincerely yours,
(署名)
Dear Sirs,
I am very glad to receive your letter and feel grateful for your offering me the post of sales manager. Satisfied as I am with both the working conditions and the salary your company offers, I regret to say that I can’t accept your gracious offer.
The main reason of my decision is that before I submitted my resume to your company, I had applied to several foreign universities for scholarship and fortunately I have received a scholarship offer from a prestigious American University. To study in that university is my long-cherished dream so I cannot give up this opportunity. The second
reason is that I major in Information Management, so perhaps I can’t make full use of my major as a sales manager.
But I still want to express again my deep gratefulness to your offer. Maybe we will have an opportunity to cooperate in the future in other aspects. I hope your company will keep growing and thrive in the days to come.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
1.越来越：be increasingly +adj.，be on the rise，a growing number of
2. 人们认为：it is generally/widely believed/held/agreed that
3.许多问题：a host/ number of problems
4.引起人们注意/关注：call/attract general/public/world attention; come into public focus; arouse public concern
5.意识到：there is a growing awareness/consciousness/realization of+名词/that+句子，
6.接触各种思想/经历：be exposed to new ideas/experiences/problems
8.接触社会：come into frequent/close contact with the world/society
9.获得成功：achieve/accomplish success
10.做出努力：make tremendous（极大的）/persistent（持久稳固的）/sustained（持续
不变的）efforts to do sth.，take great pains to do
11.产生影响：have a profound（深远的） influence\\impact\\effect on life/personality，have a dramatic显著的 effect on
12.采取措施：take effective steps/measures to
13. 解释某现象：account for / explain the phenomenon/phenomena
14.对……很好的了解：have a better understanding/appreciation of，have a new perspective（观点） on
15.培养对……的信心：develop/foster培养 one’s interest/confidence in
16.经历：undergo/experience great changes/hardships/艰苦，困难
17.学习知识/技术：pursue/acquire knowledge/technology/skills
18.克服困难：overcome obstacles/difficulties
19.面临危险/困难：be confronted/faced with/in the face of danger/difficulties
20.把….归因于：attribute the success/failure to
把……归功于：owe his success to
21.对……必不可少的：be indispensable /very important/vital to
22.强调：place/put much emphasis/stress on
23.有可能：there is （little/much）possibility/likelihood that，chances/the odds（可
能的机会） are that
24.对我很有/没有什么意义：make much/little sense to me
25.带来无穷的幸福/满足：be a source of happiness satisfaction/contentment（满意）/pride/ complaint
26.真正重要的是：what really matters/counts is……
27．引起/导致许多问题 give rise to a host of problems；lead to;
1.越来越：be increasingly +adj.，be on the rise，a growing number of
2. 人们认为：it is generally/widely believed/held/agreed that
3.许多问题：a host/ number of problem
4.引起人们注意：claim call/attract general/public/world attention to sth.
5.意识到：there is a growing awareness（知道）/realization of/that，awaken sb. To the fact/danger
6.适应新的形势/变化：adapt/adjust/accommodate（使适应） oneself to new
environment/ change
7.接触各种思想/经历：be exposed to new ideas/experiences/problems
8.接触社会：come into frequent/close contact with the world/society
9.获得成功：achieve/accomplish success
10.提出观点/建议：advance/put arguments/ideas/suggestions
forward/come up with the
11.作出努力：make tremendous（极大的）/persistent（持久稳固的）/sustained（持续不变的）effort to do sth.，take great pains to do（with work/study）
12.影响学习：interfere with studies/work
13.产生影响：have/exert a profound（深刻的） influence on life/personality，have a dramatic/ undesirable（令人不快的） effect on
14.较好地驾驭生活：be a better pilot of one’s life
15.剥夺机会/权力：deprive oneself of the chance/right/opportunity
16.取代：substitute（替代） for/take the place of the old way
17.采取措施：take effective steps/measures to
18.控制我们的环境：take/gain increasing control over our own environment
19.躲避危险/挑战：shy（躲避）/run away from the dangers/challenge
20.满足要求：meet/satisfy/accommodate the demand of
21.补偿损失：compensate for / make up for the loss/damage
22.解释某现象：account for / explain the phenomenon
23.对……很好的了解：have a better understanding/appreciation of，have a new perspective（观点） on，provide/gain an insight into
24.把某因素考虑进去：take sth. into account（consideration），give much thought to
25. 品位人生/自由青春：savor the life/freedom/youth
26.培养对……的信心：develop/foster one’s interest/confidence in
27.经历变化/困难/艰险：undergo/experience great changes/hardships/experience
28.表现出自信心等： project one’s confidence/feeling/image
29.生活充满不公正的地方：life is full of minor irritation/injustice
30.追求学习/职业：pursue one’s academic（理论的） interest/professional career
31.学习知识/技术：pursue/acquire knowledge/technology/skill
32.被看作学习的……榜样：be held up as a good example
33.交流经验/知识：share experience/ideas/problems/knowledge
34.发挥/起到重要作用：play an （important/active/great）role/part
35.逃学/缺课：skip school/a class/a meeting/a lecture
36.知识/经验丰富：rich in knowledge/experience
37.确立/追求目标：set/pursue a goal/higher standard
38.到达目标：achieve/accomplish/stain the goal/aim/object
39.克服困难：overcome obstacles/difficulty
40.面临危险/困难：be confronted/faced with/in the face of danger/difficulty
41.阻碍了成功：stand in the way of success，be an obstacle（障碍）/barrier to success/ growth
42.阻碍了发展：hamper/impede/stunt the development of
43.持传统的看法：hold conventional wisdom
44.发表看法：voice/express one’s opinion
45. 持相反/合理的观点：take the opposite/fresh view
46.揭穿某种一贯的说法：shatter the myth of
47.求得帮助：enlist one’s support/help
48.缩小差别：bridge/narrow/fell the gap/gulf（between city and country）
49.把成功/错误归咎于：attribute/own the success/failure to
50.对……重要：be indispensable/important/vital to
51.施加压力：put/exert a academic pressure on
52.重视：assign/attach much importance/significance to
53.强调：place/put much emphasis/stress/value on
54.把注意力集中在：focus/concentrate one’s attention/efforts/thoughts upon
55.提供机会/信息：provide/offer/furnish an opportunity/information for sb.
56.抓住机会：grab/seize/take the opportunity
57.得到机会：enjoy/gain access to a opportunity/likelihood that
58.有可能：there is （little/much）possibility/likelihood that，chances/the odds（可能的机会） are that
59.展开竞争：compete against/with the prize/position/control/the mastery of
60.开展运动：conduct（carryon/undertake/initiate/launch/wage） a vigorous/nation-wide/ publicity/advertising）
61.对我很有/没有什么意义：make much/little sense to me
62.带来无穷的幸福/满足：be a source of happiness satisfaction/contentment（满意）/pride/ complaint
63.献身于：devote/dedicate/commit oneself to a cause /career
64.大不（没什么）两样：make much（little/no）difference
65.真正重要的是：what really matters/accounts is……
66.改变生活旅程：change/alter the course of life
67.建立在大量的学习/实践上：build on tremendous amount of study/practice
68.进行调查/执行任务：conduct/carry out an study/task/experiment
69.辞去工作/学习：leave/quit one’s job/work/school
70.参加考试/竞赛等：enter （for）the examination/contest, race
四级写作可以引用的谚语 (2008-04-12 11:36:53)
makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者。
said than done. 说起来容易做起来难。 there is a will,there is a way. 有志者事竟成。
false step will make a great difference. 失之毫厘，谬之千里。
and steady wins the race. 稳扎稳打无往而不胜。
fall into the pit,a gain in your wit. 吃一堑，长一智。
is the mother of wisdom. 实践出真知。
work and no play makes jack a dull boy. 只工作不休息，聪明孩子也变傻。
without virtue is a rose without fragrance. 无德之美犹如没有香味的玫瑰，徒有其表。
hasty,less speed. 欲速则不达。
's never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老。
that glitters is not gold. 闪光的未必都是金子。
journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。
before you leap. 三思而后行。
was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功。
minds think alike. 英雄所见略同。
begun ,half done. 好的开始等于成功的一半。
is hard to please all. 众口难调。
of sight, out of mind. 眼不见，心不念。
speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。
back white and white back. 颠倒黑白。
things first. 凡事有轻重缓急。
news travels fast. 坏事传千里。
friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情
not to eat,but eat to live. 活着不是为了吃饭，吃饭为了活着。
speaks louder than words. 行动胜过语言。
or west, home is the best. 金窝银窝不如自家草窝。
's not the gay coat that makes the gentleman. 君子在德不在衣。
will buy no beef. 漂亮不能当饭吃。
and like make good friends. 趣味相投。
older, the wiser. 姜是老的辣。
as Romans do in Rome. 入乡随俗。
idle youth, a needy age. 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。
the tree, so the fruit. 种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。
live is to learn, to learn is to better live. 活着为了学习，学习为了更好的活着。
四六级英语作文常用句型
一、 开头句型 :
最简单就是开门见山,点出文章的中心思想。
I.．．has both advantages and disadvantages．
1．Obviously television has both advantages and disadvantages．
2．Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages．
3．Compared with cars，bikes have their advantages and disadvantages．
举一反三：
1．Although computers bring people a lot of convenience，they have many disadvantages．
2．．．．has many advantages．For example，．．．However，just as every coin has two sides，．．．has its disadvantages．
II．．．．play（s）an important role ／part in．．．
1．Computers play an important role in science and technology．
2．Computers play a more and more important role in our life．
Computers play an increasingly important role in our studies．
1．Advertisement plays an informative (give useful or interesting facts)role in our
daily life．
2．In the past，letters played a decisive(lead to a certain result) role in long-distance communication．But now ，telephone，email，fax have taken their place．
III．With the development of．．．，
1．With the development of our economy，many Chinese families can afford a car．
2．With the development of our economy and society，pollution is more and more serious．
3．With the rapid development of science and technology，people can get a college degree by taking online-courses at home．
4．With the current social and technological developments，employees with more knowledge and higher academic degrees are needed．
举一反三： 1．With the rapid increase of China's population，housing problem is becoming more and more serious．
2．With more and more women entering society，people's attitude towards women is changing．
3．With the deepening 深入of Chinese reform and opening up，an increasing number of Chinese families can afford a car．
（“越来越多”除了常用的more and more外，还可以用an increasing number of， a growing number of，a great number of等来表达。）
IV.有争议性的问题，必须在文章的开头引出人们对其的不同看法，然后再表明自己的观点。
When it comes to．．．，some people think ／believe that．．．，others argue ／claim that opposite ／reverse is true．There is probably some truth in both arguments ／statements，but．．．当说到……，有些人认为……，但另一些人则持相反的观点……。这两种观点可能都有点道理，但……。
下面这个例子：
When it comes to TV，some people believe that it is extremely valuable，as it provides relaxation, entertainment and education． Others argue that it is harmful for it begins to control our lives and deprives people of time to do other activities．There is probably some truth in both sides．But we must realize that television itself is neither good or bad．It is the uses to which it is put that determines its value to society．
二、结尾句型
总结全文时除常用到in one ／a word/in sum__/in con___/all ___，generally speaking等外，没有固定模式。提出解决办法时却常使用下一句型。
I．．take measures to do sth．
1．We should take measures to control pollution in order to save the world．
2．We'd better take effective measures to prevent students from cheating on exams．
3．The government decided to take strong measures against drug abuse．
4．Urgent measures should be taken to prevent terrorists from carrying out further attacks．
开头句型II
far as I am concerned (in my opinion), …
the proverb 谚语says,…
has to be noticed that...
`s generally recognized that...
`s likely that…
calls for special attention is that...
’s no doubt that...毫无疑问
开头句型III
1)It’s well known to us that …\\As is known to us, …\\As we all know, ...
2)Speaking of …., it is a topic that is being widely talked about.
3)From the graph(坐标图)(table表格，chart天气图)listed above，it can be seen that ...
4)As a proverb says，Where there is a will，there is a way.
例如As is well known to us，it is important for the students to know the world outside campus.
The reason for this is obvious. Nowadays，the society is changing and developing rapidly，and the campus is no longer an “ivory tower”. As college students，we must
get in touch with the world outside the campus. Only in this way can we adapt ourselves to the society quickly after we graduate.
再如： Does it pay （get an advantage）to be honestThis is a topic that is being widely talked about and different people have different opinions on it.
二，衔接句型
A case in point is ...
As is often the case...
As stated in the previous paragraph如前段所述
But the problem is not so simple. Therefore然而问题并非如此简单，所以……
But it’s a pity that...
For all that...In spite of the fact that...
Further, we hold opinion that...
However , the difficult lies in...
Similarly, we should pay attention to...
not...but...不是，而是
In view of the present station.鉴于目前形势
As has been mentioned above...
In this respect, we may as well (say)从这个角度上我们可以说
However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is...然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面
三，结尾句型
I will conclude by saying...
Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...
All things considered,总而言之
It may be safely said that...
Therefore, in my opinion, it’s more advisable...
It can be concluded from the discussion that...从中我们可以得出这样的结论
From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看来……也许更好
四，万能句型
Let’s take...to illustrate this.试举例以兹证明
let’s take the above chart as an example to illustrate this.
It’s remains to be further studied...
There’s question is how...
so that, so...that...
写作导航: On the Overuse of the Mobile Phone
第1段：描述图片，概述生活中出 现过度使用手机的现象
Having a cell phone in hand and at the ready, growing increasing dependent on their mobile phones
第2段：详细介绍过度使用手机 产生的不良后果
trigger many health problems
an Immediate threat to their Iife, health and property, less chance of face-to-face interactions
第3段：进行总结，并提出建议
use them appropriately and rationally
参考范文
On the Overuse of the Mobile Phone
【1】As is shown in the picture, having a mobile phone in hand and at the ready is the default mode while walking on the streets. 【2】What this cartoon symbolically reveals is that people nowadays, especially young people, are growing increasingly dependent on their mobile phones.
【3】It is true that the mobile phone has brought great convenience to people's life. However, just as is illustrated in the picture, the overuse of it may lead to several bad consequences. 【4】To begin with, there is evidence that long-term exposure to electromagnetic radiation may trigger many health problems, such as insomnia, headaches and even cancers.【5】In addition, when people immerse themselves in the mobile phone, they tend to pay less attention to their surroundings, posing an immediate threat to their life, health and property.【6】Last but not least, excessive use of mobile phones means much less chance of face-to-face interactions with the people who populate their real lives.
【7】In conclusion, while mobile phones have contributed a lot to making our life more convenient, we should use them appropriately and rationally.
【1】开门见山,对图片进行简单描述。
【2】点明图片揭示的现象,
【3】点出手机对人们生活的积极影响。
【4】【5】【6】分三点阐明过度使用手机 对人们生活的消极影响。
【7】总结全文:使用手机要适度。
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