典例 请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。 满分作文 The news is about a young 阅卷老师点评 1.层次分明，结disabled man attacked on a bus 构清晰 A young man was slapped in the face until for not offering his seat to a 本篇习作按照三he bled because he didn’t offer his seat woman with a baby，which leads 段式：概括文章to a woman with a baby on a bus in downtown a debate about who is right and 大意→谈谈自己Hangzhou.Later he was proved to be a disabled person. who is wrong. I am so upset that in our 对这则新闻的看法及感受→对于In a series of cases nationwide，we see society the woman with a baby 创建和谐社会自people being beaten for refusing to give should be so impolite.It was 己的一些建议。up their seats on public transport，which wrong of her to get her justice 按照这一顺序展seems to be a moral problem about correct with violence，which will behavior and self-sacrifice. really do great harm to our 开叙述，不但做到了要点齐全，People with moral deficiency (who don’t society.Today in our society，而且富有层次give up their seats to deserving people) many other people like her 感。 can be condemned，but they don’t deserve would take it for granted that 2.高级词汇的使to be treated with violence because they they should be offered a seat 用 offend moral values but not laws.In on the crowded bus，as the 习作中用到了：comparison，the attackers behave worse. morality requires.However，if do great harm The attackers regard relying on violence I were a passenger on the as their only choice if people ignore to；take...for crowded bus，I would stand out granted; stand their appeals to give up their seats.It to tell her that the young man out; in need seems they start a shout or a fight for is also in need of help because of; build up; the sake of justice，but can they still of his disability. fight against; think of their personal intention when So there is still a long way to civilized and they call violence justice？ go for us to build up a harmonious society等，显示了作者扎实的综合语言运用能This “violent justice” can confuse many harmonious society.In my people and encourage them to do the same，opinion，we should fight especially when we are overpowered by illogical mood. If cruel and rude acts are rooted in children’s hearts，society will never step into civilization.The practice against the violent justice and try every means to avoid it 力，让文章更具happening so as to solve such 有可读性。 kind of problems and safeguard 3.多样化句型our civilized and harmonious 的使用 习作中运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句；who 引导的名词性从句；if虚拟条件句；there be句型等。 violates common values，neither solving society. problems nor safeguarding civilized society. 写作内容 1.用约30个词概括短文的要点； 2.用约120个词谈谈你对这一事件的看法，内容包括： (1)读完这则新闻，你有什么感受？ (2)假如你是车上的一名乘客，你会怎样做？ (3)就如何创建文明、和谐社会提出你的建议。 写作要求 1.你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不能直接引用原文语句； 2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 评分标准 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。 2
读写任务型写作中的记叙文要求考生描述一件与原阅读材料有关联的事件，并说出自己从事件中得到的启示或对所描述现象发表自己的看法。 1．写作步骤
概括原文→衔接过渡→描述事件→发表看法 概括原文记叙文常用模版：
(1)The passage/story is about a misunderstanding between a student and a teacher. (2)The author tells us a story about... (3)The passage is a story about...
(4)According to the passage，the hero in the story... (5)From the story we know that... 记叙文常用的过渡语句：
(1)This reminds me of the similar experience.
(2)This story brings me back to an event many years ago. (3)I had a similar experience.
2．注意事项
(1)注意时态的运用。记述经历类的记叙文，无论写人还是记事，通常以过去时态为主。如果所写的内容不但有过去的人和事，而且还有现在的人和事，那么对过去的人和事应采用过去时态，对现在的人和事应采用现在时态。
(2)注意人称的一致性。要根据题目的要求选用合适的人称，做到上下文人称一致。 (3)篇章结构。通常以时间或事件发展的顺序为线索，有时也可采用倒叙手法。详写主要情节，略写次要情节。
(4)根据关键词和主题句进行概括。根据圈定的关键词和主题句进行改写，用相应的同义词进行替换或句型转换，千万不能原封不动地抄写原文。应变换表达原文的句子。
原文 You will not succeed. You can’t be too careful when driving. I can’t agree with you more.
变换表达 You will fail. You should be careful when driving. I quite agree with you.
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(2018·无锡高三期末)
In life，we will succeed and fail often for reasons that are entirely out of our control.For instance，we can be incredibly nice and love someone deeply，and they may not love us back.We can work harder than anyone else at our lessons and still not be as excellent as our peers.We can eat healthy food，exercise and stay away from alcohol and cigarettes，and still get sick.
My first marriage ended in divorce.To me，it felt very unfair.I had worked hard to be a good wife and mother.However，no matter what I did，I could not make the relationship work.
I could have been shut down by that experience.I could have decided that if one person didn’t appreciate me as a wife，then no one would.I could have given up.But I knew that I wanted to be married.I knew that I wanted to experience traditional family life.So I didn’t let one seemingly unfair experience stop me from believing that I could one day be happily married.And then one day，I met this kind，thoughtful，generous man with whom I now have a wonderful friendship and marriage.But that wouldn’t have happened if I had decided to give up after one failed marriage.
What I’ve learned over the years is that we can do all the things that deserve a good outcome，but get bad things in return instead.
The bottom line is that life is not fair.That is a tough pill to swallow for many of us.As a result，some people shut down after being hit by even one unfair blow from life.They can’t handle the fact that our efforts don’t always get the results that we expect.But if we let life’s unfairness defeat us，we will never receive the beautiful blessings that life has in store for us. 写作内容
1．用约30个词概括短文内容；
2．用约120个词就“生活中处处存在看似不公平的事”这一主题发表你的看法，内容包括以下要点：
(1)你对这一现象的看法(至少两点)； (2)假如你遇到这一现象，你会如何处理。 写作要求
1．可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子； 2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 评分标准
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
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参考范文
Life is full of varieties of seemingly unfair experiences，which may defeat those who have lost courage and even confidence，but bless those who remain true to their original aspiration.
For many reasons，we often have to encounter unfairness in the complex society.No one can avoid or escape unexpected changes in our daily lives；however，unfairness，if it sets us reflecting upon our mistakes and failure，may be a route toward success.
When we’re faced with life’s seeming unfairness，our faith needs to jump in.When life doesn’t go according to plan，we have to let go of the outcome that we are looking forward to and keep trying，working hard and doing the right thing.Please don’t be discouraged.Accept that life is neither fair nor straightforward.And by knowing that if we remain confident，we can drive our unfair experiences away and use them for our benefit.
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